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Fic: An Occasion for Firewhiskey for huldrejenta

Dec 30, 2015 11:25

Title: An Occasion For Firewhisky
Author: hastendown
Recipient: huldrejenta
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 1700
Summary: “Say, gentlemen. Whatever where you doing in the middle of the fourth floor corridor at this hour?”

( It’s one of the very few perks of being a werewolf, he thinks, or perhaps it is one of the many perks of being Prongs’ friend: getting to borrow the cloak whenever he wants. )

2015, rated nc17, fic

Comments 8

bearshorty December 31 2015, 01:27:48 UTC

I loved that Remus wants to be the sweater -that paragraph is brilliant -and I also love that they behave like teenage boys. That part was very well written too. And James and Peter looking at the Map was perfection. Such a lovely, happy story.

mustntgetmy December 31 2015, 03:47:46 UTC

Oooh, this is lovely. It's both hot (Sirius's dirty talk!!) and giddy - you can definitely feel that first blush of love between them. Really excellent job here.

brighty18 December 31 2015, 03:49:20 UTC

Oh, that was super darling! Both boys were incredibly cute, but the tone was spot-on perfect for the story. Bits like this: There is an envelope in his hands, and it’s addressed to him. It’s addressed to Moony the Marauder, to be precise, which brings the number of possible senders down to three. just made me smile and giggle.

Really sweet!

museinabsentia December 31 2015, 17:48:46 UTC

Oh, I love when they act like the teenagers they are at this era. Far too often they get treated like adults that just don't have as many years to back them up yet. You've got that boyish quality down quite nicely, the impetuousness and impulsiveness. Sirius stalking Remus to watch and see how he took finding the letter was just perfectly him; so was James and Peter watching the map to spy on their friends without the risk of being spotted (or seeing something they really weren't ready for). What a great little scene. Lovely job.

llaeyro January 1 2016, 03:19:51 UTC

This was so adorable and yummy! I love how realistically teenage-clumsy and desperate the smut was. Trust Sirius to not be able to just leave the letter, as if he could just sit around waiting, so very in character. The sweater was just a lovely symbol of Remus's possessiveness, and in such a cute way!