Concert fic (Idina Menzel/Kristin Chenoweth, R and NC-17)

[waywardpen]

My first post here. I'm nursing my 2 obsessions du jour: Idina Menzel/Kristin Chenoweth, and drabbles. I offer 2 versions of the same theme, curious as to which you folks here might like better

Comments

[slcadet]

Wow...very intense. Well written too.

[projectcyborg]

hee, well, I like the second one better, because it has PORN! yummy.

from a writing perspective, I like it better because it's more punchy. the second section is cleaner here and thus more effective -- the part you took out about the microphone as naked breast was sort of odd and didn't add anything emotionally. in a drabble, if something CAN be taken out, it's almost always better that way. and then the new last section is a more dramatic ending -- yes, because it has PORN! but it also gives a complete shape to the evening/narrative -- before, during, after.

[sinful_caesar]

OOOOOOOhhhhhhh i like your new icon!!! *does a little dance*

[projectcyborg]

it's thanks to thatfangirl, who has great Wicked icons :)

[sinful_caesar]

might i cordially invite you to join my friends list? my love/obsession/conspiracy theory over Chenzel (idina/kristin) love has kinda overflowed into my journal to a really high degree and now my f list is a place for chenzel lovers to gather the wagons so you must must must join up!

And if its alright can i post a link to this story on my journal? cuz this is HOT yo!! You MUST MUST MUST write more!!! Bravo!

[senator_dongle]

This is wonderfully hot... After listening to the soundtrack, I have wanted to see these two, well, fuck, as does one of my friends, who has no clue who they are :D