I do not understand why this doesn't have more comments. :S I really like it! It's simple and mellow without unnecessary drama.. and the pacing is spot on! I really enjoy how you show the progress and build up of their relationship slowly. It makes it much more realistic and natural. ♥
I don't either! haha, kidding, but thank you for those lovely compliments ;u; this sort of started in an experiment in style, trying to work on telling simple details of a story and it seems to worked out! <3
This is just really sweet and adorable and I'm going to ignore Minho's rejection although I do wonder whatever happened to him. I shall commend you on the pacing because it just makes things seem a lot more natural. Oh and there is something that I have to bring up.. "Even though it’s really important to Jinki that Taemin drinks pepsi, because he thinks coke is gross. He’s not sure if they can remain friends if he drinks coke." Is there something you want to talk about?
nah, I think that's something you and jinki will have to talk about e: I honestly don't care between pepsi and coke, as long as I get caffeine.
and omasdklfjadf the pacing of this fic is actually one of the things I'm most proud of and I'm glad you noticed it TT I always read fics and stuff happens so quickly and I'm always like wait what just happened, like the other day they were like no fuck you I hate you and now they're making out? (disclaimer: I have not read a fic like that, but that would be my reaction to it, unless it's a love-hate-fuck relationship, which is when I become okay with it)
I forgot what I was saying, but yes, thank you so much for all your lovely comments faith ;~;
I just found your journal today (since you updated on shinee-replay) and I've been reading your writing. I really enjoyed them! I hope you continue to write more SHINee fanfics - especially ones with onew pairings >___
ajdlfjadlsfj ; ; thank you! onew is my forever!bias and I legit ship him with everyone and I don't think I have a kpop otp that does not include him. I like to whore him around lol. thanks again <33
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I shall commend you on the pacing because it just makes things seem a lot more natural.
Oh and there is something that I have to bring up..
"Even though it’s really important to Jinki that Taemin drinks pepsi, because he thinks coke is gross. He’s not sure if they can remain friends if he drinks coke."
Is there something you want to talk about?
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and omasdklfjadf the pacing of this fic is actually one of the things I'm most proud of and I'm glad you noticed it TT I always read fics and stuff happens so quickly and I'm always like wait what just happened, like the other day they were like no fuck you I hate you and now they're making out? (disclaimer: I have not read a fic like that, but that would be my reaction to it, unless it's a love-hate-fuck relationship, which is when I become okay with it)
I forgot what I was saying, but yes, thank you so much for all your lovely comments faith ;~;
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my only regret is that i couldn't read it earlier..
thank u for this gorgeous fic :)))))
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