Comments | royalwisteria: make yourself

royalwisteria

make yourself

Mar 14, 2014 02:00

onho
pg-13 (swearing, mentions of sex)
wc 10,240

( If Jinki was a better person, it wouldn’t matter, it would be added to a long list of things Jinki ignores because they are inconsequential compared to being with Minho. )

oneshot!fic, member: jonghyun, fandom: shinee, pairing: onho

Comments 8

banana_toffee March 14 2014, 16:37:32 UTC

You made me tear up with this story. I just wanted to hug Jinki so bad. I especially loved Jonghyun in this. I loved it and I'm saving it in my memories.

kim_jaejoong March 15 2014, 02:38:07 UTC

Yooo I love this so much, you don even know, ok. There is so much introspection and at one point it almost hit home >~<
Although we barely had insight on Minho, it really worksto an advantage that way imo because i was able to empathize better (seriously, it's impossible not to empathize with him) and see Jinki's character development very, very clearly and it makes it seem all the more realistic.
God, it's been years since I've last read an OnHo fic. YEARS. (I feel so frickin old LOL.) This is actually my first onho fic in forever and I'm really glad I stumbled onto a gem. :)

kpopforlife March 15 2014, 08:52:34 UTC

wow this is like... so fucking good. So so so sad and real and painful and wow. Real tears.

"Apologies are not my forte, he carefully pens. But I’m trying. This he scraps as well, crumpling it into a small, tight ball and then he carefully pries it open and tries to smooth out the crinkles. They don’t disappear and neither do the words."

For whatever reason this hit me really hard.

rallyingpoint March 15 2014, 17:03:18 UTC

because your onho never fails to make me feel things, i come out of hiding (although i promised you a review a long time ago on twitter, you probably don't remember). so. i teared up again.

it's perfect, i'm out of words. sorry if this doesn't qualify as a proper review.

blacknerdjade April 24 2014, 03:54:08 UTC

I have read this 4 batrillion times and I'm just realizing that I haven't TOLD you I've read this 4 batrillion times and just how amazing you are with culling emotion out of people. I have a very limited vocabulary when it comes to praise like I'm some kind of recessive mute girl but, every time I read something of yours, I am floored with emotions. It's almost magical. I am reeling because I FEEL.

*sighs*