fic: Let Me Touch Your Heart

[roxymissrose]

Title: Let Me Touch Your Heart
Author: roxymissrose
Pairings/Characters: Dean/Sam
Rating: R
Word Count: 2572
Summary: Why is a vampire after Sam Winchester?
Warning, A/N: As in the original fic, I played with Vampire lore to suit the story. Character death. Sort of a prequel to an older story, Warm Hand In Mine.

Comments

[milly_gal]

It's okay, I didn't need to be able to breathe, or to see through the tears streaming down my face. Don't worry about the ugly gaping wound in my chest, it's fine! ;) This was beautiful honey, absolutely beautiful!

[roxymissrose]

AWWWWW!! *CLINGS*

Thank you so much!!

[amypond45]

Amazing and heartwrenchingly good. Creepy Dean not leaving Sam alone, leaving all those gruesome gifts, Sam's grief and horror, all of it feels intensely palpable, like a bleeding heart slowly ripped out and squeezed as the blood drips down someone's arm (oh, that would be mine, sorry for the mess...!)

[roxymissrose]

*swirls mop about, pats you*

Your comment made me smile, then fistpump, and say, "yes!" really quietly, so no one would overhear. And then I danced a bit in my seat too! You have no idea how happy you made me! :)

[twoboys2love]

That was so eerie and heart-wrenching! Well done!

[roxymissrose]

Thank you so much, my dear!!

[radical147]

What a gut punch, but in such a beautiful and haunting way. There were so many lines that had me "nooooooo" *clutches heart"-ing but for the sake of brevity I'll pick the one that really did me in: "The sound of his brother's voice; that missed, that desired, that thing he needs. Sounds like a dream, like everything he's ever wanted." In that whole line there're only four words that are more than one syllable AND YET it had my heart in my throat. I could feel Sam's terror and sorrow and longing and surrender... UGH. YOU DONE ME IN. <3

[roxymissrose]

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!

Oh wow, I couldn't believe it was you!!! I was all, "hmmmm...seems familiar--WTF!"

Thank you a million times for commenting! Wow, I feel like I nailed it now--you have no idea just how much it means to me that you think this works. I almost feel guilty about what I'm going to do to Sam next, because yeah, he is feeling all that. I'm so pleased it came through the way I hoped it would.

AND THANK YOU FOR VISITING!! ♥ ♥ ♥