SV fic: WHEN I WAS LOST

[roxymissrose]

Comments

[rosy5000]

LOL Clark the living six foot four dildo! I think that's been my favorite line so far. *g*

I love how warped and complicated, yet loving, you can write these two.

"You mean-I could have had this before?" Lex gasped.

Oh Lex. Eric was so right, sometimes, you can be like a little, lost puppy.

[roxymissrose]

*beams*

wiggles like happy puppy*

[twinsarein]

Okay, I had no clue, apparently what Clark had figured out, because he hadn't really figured anything out. What a long, hard road these two are having. They are both being so stupid and guarded with each other. Clark finally admitted to himself that he was Lex's from that first meeting, but I think Lex is just as much Clark's. They just aren't saying so.

I'm glad Eric has continued to be such a good friend to Clark. I feel bad that he won't ever have Clark the way he wants, but at least he is willing to continue the friendship.

I'm glad Clark finally thawed the Ice Queen. She was intimidating, but all it took was a few tears to have her changing her tune. I don't think anyone could resist comforting a crying Clark.

The last scene was heartwarming, and I hope there will be more like it in the last section. I'd like them to stop being stupid about each other. *g*

Btw, the six-four dildo line - priceless.

[jlvsclrk]

I can't believe I've been away from this story for so long - it's just so darned good! Of course, the sex scenes are hot - that's a given coming from you. But what makes the story so much better are all those moments in between. I wanted to stand up and cheer when Clark told Lex off about the whole 'tell me a story' bit, and then you turned it around at the end by having Lex open up. I think my favorite bit though, one which brought tears to my eyes, was the scene with Cook where Clark finally gets a chance to talk to someone about his mother. I could really feel his loss.

[roxymissrose]

Thanks so much for the comment about the sex--you know that's always my greatest worry--that the sex is boring.

I'm so very happy that Clark's feeling of loss came through, because I thought this was so important, that it be obvious that Clark was always grieving. *happy sigh*

[sabriel_0405]

This is probably my favorite chapter. I'm a sucker for things that bring me to tears and this does it, in two places, every time I read it.

[roxymissrose]

I feel kind of bad that that makes me so happy but there you have it...thank you so very much!