What Inspires You?

Jan 07, 2005 17:17


if you already read over my poems on myspace then you can just go past this entry but if not let me know what you think.

1st poem - more emo

i am sorrow love
you are the banister over which i hang
i put the gun back in the drawer
because both ways youre gone
but only one way lets you enjoy the fall before death

youre always faked out
and im always ( Read more... )

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hope4forevr January 9 2005, 18:34:35 UTC
intense poems sara. Makes me want to write some more. But I start crying when I write depressing poems!!

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darkdt8 January 10 2005, 04:44:35 UTC
i think those were the best poems i've ever read in my life. And probably the deepest too. You really can connect your feelings to your words. What pisses me off is that everyone won't understand it because they're way too fukin dumb. But like i said, i love it.

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