Fic: On Assignment by rowena_dawson (Criminal Minds Hotch/Reid FRAO) 1/2

[rowena_dawson]

Title: On Assignment (1/2)

Author: rowena_dawson

Rating: FRAO (NC-17)

Length:  ~4,300

Pairings: Hotch/Reid (Switches from Reid, Hotch, and both POV.)

Warnings: Slash, masturbation, m/m oral sex, dirty talk, slight possibility of being caught

Disclaimer:  I don’t own any of these characters. I just play with them.

Spoilers: None

Summary: Reid gets called

Comments

[one_side2002]

I like your fic and think that you got a good grip on the characters. One thing though, the description of Reid as a 'young boy' is quite disturbing for me, especially in the context of Hotch caressing him at night... Reid is a young man, but he certainly is not a boy anymore and if Hotch were to see him as one, he would never touch him.

Just my ten cents.

Take care
Val

[rowena_dawson]

Hmm...interesting. Thank you for your criticism. It definitely puts it in a different light when you put it like that.

Thanks.

[martina66]

Love it, and even Morgan calls him a kid, I don't think Hotch calling him a boy is meant in that way, it just implies to me that he sees him as young..........

[mondays_eyes]

I totally love this :D

I love the line about Garcia missing her technology so much that she reached out to touch keys that weren't there :D

Reid's Bill Nye The Science Guy ringtone was too much, man, I actually laughed out loud.

Great fic. Can't WAIIIT to see what happens next.

[rowena_dawson]

Thanks! :D My friend actually HAS that ringtone and I thought it was absolutely PERFECT for Reid.

[mondays_eyes]

You're so right! It is THE Reid ringtone :D

One of the people in my choir class has that ringtone and it went off..... right in the middle of one of the two pauses in the song we were singing. Priceless XD

Once again, great fic.