New Xena/Ares Fic: "The One"

[rowan_d]

Okay, I sat down a couple of weeks ago to work on my X/A "Five", and this accidentally happened. Blame Lillith (the Muse, not the vampire). Finally got the fic polished off and beta-ed

Comments

[auroragoddess1]

That was beautiful. Words can't describe it. The way you expressed the way their relationship developed over time in short but powerful sentences (like when "she kissed him" and then "she kissed him again, this time she didn't stop"). Lovely.

In particular, I love the last part about how he's no longer a part of the space around her but one with it.

All of it is great.

Wonderful job.

[rowan_d]

Thank you so much, Aurora! I'm really glad you liked this, being the devoted X/A girl that you are.:) Sorry I was so slow replying, my Kidlet was actually in the hospital.:( But, yes, I think I've definitely fallen down the 'shipper rabbit hole.*g*

[melskim]

Great work, It's lovely. The undersatnding and the slow pace of their relationship is formidably made. My fav is the dreams comfort of one another.

[rowan_d]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this.

My fav is the dreams comfort of one another.

I'm a total sucker for dream hurt/comfort.;)

Thanks for the lovely feed.:)

[celievamp]

Very powerful and beautiful and completely in character. Well done.

[rowan_d]

Thank you so much, J!:) *hugs*

[tangofiction]

Ahh, nothing like a bit of X/A hurt/comfort. It's more than that, naturally, but it's nice to get the shipper warm fuzzies once in a while... Thanks for writing and sharing!

[rowan_d]

And thank you for the lovely feed.:) Yeah, I'm a hopeless h/c addict. Sometimes I just can't help myself.*g*

[aoxelfrieda]

*sighs* That was . . . delicious. It's just what I need to get through finishing the next SS promo!