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rowan_d

New SG-1 Ficathon Fic: "Beneath the Waves" - Part 2 or 2

Jun 30, 2007 16:56

THIS IS PART TWO OF TWO. Find Part One Here

TITLE: Beneath the Waves
RECIPIENT: abyssinia4077RATING: Teen ( Read more... )

sdficathon, stargate, my fic, fic: stargate

Comments 33

frbuffy June 30 2007, 22:08:15 UTC

A really good job on the S/D friendship and more. I also really enjoyed the small but greatly appreciated scene between Janet and Sam...You played so well the "i'm crazy" part...Very well-written as usual!!!

rowan_d July 11 2007, 22:46:11 UTC

A really good job on the S/D friendship and more.

Thank you! Glad you liked.:)

I also really enjoyed the small but greatly appreciated scene between Janet and Sam...You played so well the "i'm crazy" part...Very well-written as usual!!!

Thanks so much! And I had fun working with Janet again, too. It had been a while since I had written her, and I really enjoy it.

siggy63 June 30 2007, 22:12:43 UTC

Super fic. I loved how you wrote the mental slippage. It was so smooth just as it would have had to be for Sam to believe it. I always like your Daniel much better than the one in the show, so ship away. As usual with one of your fics the whole thing played like a film reel in my head. Gorgeous, but then you never write anything that isn't.

rowan_d July 11 2007, 22:48:03 UTC

Super fic. I loved how you wrote the mental slippage. It was so smooth just as it would have had to be for Sam to believe it.

Thank you!

I always like your Daniel much better than the one in the show, so ship away.

HA!:D I have a way of reworking the world just slightly so that it is what I think it ought to be. Problem is, I don't always realize I'm doing it.;)

As usual with one of your fics the whole thing played like a film reel in my head. Gorgeous, but then you never write anything that isn't.

::hugs:: As I've said many times before, you're too good for my ego. Glad you enjoyed my latest angstfest.:)

zorb June 30 2007, 22:37:16 UTC

Reading this fic was becoming a part of SG-1 - in Sam's, PoV, I was lost along with her, and in Daniel's, the deep care they all have for her was tangible. I was nervous right up until the end about what could happen to Sam. Despite Daniel's concerns over not really knowing Sam, you showed a delicate turn of phrase (for instance, "Hey," she said, deep voice missing a few threads, like the crosshatch shading of a pen and ink sketch.") that belies it. Of course, I enjoyed the shipping, but leaving that aspect open-ended worked quite well, since the real drama was Sam's well-being. If that's okay, then no matter what else happens, it's all good. :-)

Unique and enthralling. Well worth a wait!

rowan_d September 25 2007, 21:47:32 UTC

First, so sorry to be so horribly long replying to this. My life sort of...exploded this summer. I'm attempting to paste it back together now.:)

Reading this fic was becoming a part of SG-1

Wow, what a lovely compliment, thank you so much.

Unique and enthralling. Well worth a wait!

Thanks!!:) Very glad you enjoyed it, especially consider what kind of brilliant writing you produce yourself.:)

abyssinia4077 July 1 2007, 03:17:40 UTC

*bounces some more*

Sorry I didn't get to read this sooner and I'll be back tomorrow or Monday with more detailed comments but I loved it and it was so worth the wait!

*squishes Sam* *squishes Daniel*

It was just...it was so Sam and so Daniel and such teamy goodness and Janet and Jacob and....did I mention Sam and Daniel?

Wonderful!
*twirls you*

rowan_d September 25 2007, 21:48:41 UTC

So sorry I haven't replied to this yet...

*bounces some more*

Sorry I didn't get to read this sooner and I'll be back tomorrow or Monday with more detailed comments but I loved it and it was so worth the wait!

YAY!:) So happy you like it. ::bounces::

Wonderful!
*twirls you*

Eee!! ::loves being twirled::

rigel_7 July 1 2007, 04:37:12 UTC

Oh Rowan! That was well worth the wait.

Beautifully observed, and enthralling from start to end. Sam's hallucinations gave me a bit of a shiver - fantastic plot device there :D

I'll have to read this one again.

rowan_d September 25 2007, 21:49:46 UTC

Oh Rowan! That was well worth the wait.

Oh, thank you! So glad you think so.:)

Beautifully observed, and enthralling from start to end. Sam's hallucinations gave me a bit of a shiver - fantastic plot device there :D

I'll have to read this one again.

I'm so glad to hear this worked for you.:) Muchly appreciate the beautiful feed!:)