It's Always About Toads

Jul 17, 2013 00:13

Just a little poem, because.

tire tracks zig zag over the road
toads in the furrows
lost in early may snow

still not sure about the order of the lines.

Huzzah!

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randomlanguage July 28 2013, 01:55:25 UTC
Hmmm

I don't know if you want advice, but what about

tire tracks zig zag over the road
toads, lost in the furrows
of early may snow

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