And a Harry Potter ficlet and a drabble

[rospberry]

Not so good - pretty bad really - but here's the first H/D I've written in forever. For interest purposes only (and probably with a finite online shelf-life *finger hovers over delete button*). I was clearly obsessed with hot boys slamming against walls last night.

Title: Wall
Fandom: Harry Potter
Author:

Comments

[oldenuf2nb]

Wow.

You're right; this is the most canon Draco I think I've ever seen in fanfiction. And I kinda wanna smack him one.

Lovely job; the characterizations of both of them are spot on, my dear.

Welcome back. We missed you. You're simply too good not to be doing more of this. *Oh, and buttons on the street? Yes, indeed!*

[rospberry]

Ta, love. blushes* I missed writing...I forgot how good it is just to write something. And yeah, this Draco deserves a good kick up the arse. I started this one of with 'our' Draco *grin* in the role but it just didn't fit...no way would fanon Draco behave like that unless it was for Harry's own good. Canon Draco though...

[gregoria44]

Ouch! (And also, YAY!)

"Potter," Draco repeated. He stepped forwards, letting the door swing shut on the raucous party, muting the sound and leaving an eerie ghost of revelry in the air. The stillness was punctuated only by the sound of Harry's heels on the stone floor as he began to ascend the stairs.

Nice imagery, especially the 'ghost of revelry'.

Yum.

[gregoria44]

Oops, read the wrong way round:

The warm lips returned to his neck, where, in Draco's opinion, they belonged.

Hee hee!

[rospberry]

You're just going to use that icon every chance you get, aren't you? *grin* I love you so much for picking the lines I liked writing the best. Uncanny actually.

[modestroad]

Your Draco was so...canon! I love it! You know that HP is not my thing but l love your stories. Welocme back to the dark side. We misses you. :-)

[rospberry]

LOL writing canon Draco always makes me want to go and have a shower. He's a git. Thanks for the lovely comment - I am corrupting you to the HP dark side now MWAHAHAHA. Now if only I can convince you about Supernatural. Or even Robin Hood *grin*. Or what about Primeval...dinosaurs anyone?

[bewarethesmirk]

Well, obviously I don't like the part where Harry and Draco aren't together yet...and I do think Draco was an arse, but it was well done. I see this being more realistic -- Draco working through public opinion and the old rivalry and all that. Seems more classic H/D.

And anyway, the writing was gorgeous. Your imagery was succinct and masterful without being verbose and unnecessary - that's quite a talent to wield.

[rospberry]

Aw... now see, coming from you, that's a hell of a compliment. Thanks so much! Maybe someday you can convince me of the merits of canon!Draco ;p

[bewarethesmirk]

Heh, canon!Draco doesn't have to be a complete arse. I prefer a fanon!canon!snarky!Draco hybrid. :P

But I'll try to sway you over to the appeal of canon!Draco, oh yes, you wait.

[megyal]

Actually, that means you are the person I thought you were

My heart is really breaking for Harry in this, especially where he was trudging up the stairs, waiting to see if Draco would do anything else. Oh, *heart clench*

[rospberry]

Ah, you're finding the secret stuff I don't have the courage to post anywhere else in case I get flamed for it! LOL. Thanks so much (again) for commenting!