‘You’re very welcome.’ She patted him on the shoulder, smiling as he bounded across the room to fling an arm exuberantly around Remus’ shoulder. Professor McGonagall exchanged glances with Dumbledore, and he chuckled softly as she murmured under her breath.
‘Good boy.’
I love your secondary characters. They are so well thought out. Thank you for sharing this whole piece. I have loved the twists & the memories of places that I loved when I was abroad.
This is briliant! I love how gleeful Harry is and the exchange between Remus and Dumbledore and Sirius and McGonagall were well played out too. The last line is my favorite! hehe.
*sniffles* I loved this!! And I dont usually read anything below an R rating (what can I say, I enjoy my stories with teh sex XD ) but yours kept me hooked!
There probably will be a sequel! I'm afraid there probably won't be much sex in it (I'm not very good at writing it - I felt very daring writing Chapter 4 of this!) but I do plan to write other stories in this universe.
This isn't criticism, but I have to say I'm surprised it's ended. I assumed for some reason that this would be a longer story. There's certainly room for more, if you did choose to continue it. If not, then that's fine, too!
Oooh, I totally forgot to clarify this! I do plan to write more, just as one-offs in the same universe. I shall make a post to that effect in a minute!
Thank you for reading, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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‘You’re very welcome.’ She patted him on the shoulder, smiling as he bounded across the room to fling an arm exuberantly around Remus’ shoulder. Professor McGonagall exchanged glances with Dumbledore, and he chuckled softly as she murmured under her breath.
‘Good boy.’
I love your secondary characters. They are so well thought out. Thank you for sharing this whole piece. I have loved the twists & the memories of places that I loved when I was abroad.
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sequel maybe? *puppy dog eyes* hehe
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This isn't criticism, but I have to say I'm surprised it's ended. I assumed for some reason that this would be a longer story. There's certainly room for more, if you did choose to continue it. If not, then that's fine, too!
Congratulations on a wonderful, sweet tale!
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Thank you for reading, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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