Letting your barriers down (1/1)

[rosie_not_rose]

Title: Letting your barriers down (1/1)
Pairing: B/B
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4988 (Although over 5100 according to ff.net? Weird.)
Summary: Oneshot. One of the moments you get at the end of an episode between Booth and Brennan, except extended and romance-d up! Includes dancing, eating chinese and... well, you'll see.
Additional Notes: My second

Comments

[tiffie_90]

This. Right here. This is what needs to happen. I love stories where Booth doesn't really set out to confess his feelings, but lets it happen more naturally I guess. And that moment where he was brushing his fingers across her face was amazing, I loved it. Beautiful job. :)

[rosie_not_rose]

Ooh thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed.

[rosie_not_rose]

Haha, I think this is one of the best reviews I've ever had! XD

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

[wehaveacase]

Ugh...too perfect. This. right here. has to happen!

“I’m in your arms and it feels nice, and right somehow, and yet I feel quite… hollow.”

Exactly..I can just see her realizing it.

[rosie_not_rose]

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed. And YES, it definitely needs to happen. XD

[sweetjamielee]

Oh yay, I adored this! So beautifully in character, the easy, bickery-ness of them just being together in the beginning, the perfectly natural transition to sexual tension...and of course, the panic when it ascends into something more. I had never considered before the thought of Brennan bursting into tears when Booth REALLY kisses her...but suddenly it seems more than plausible.

Really amazing job! Thanks!

[rosie_not_rose]

YAY thanks, I'm chuffed with this review! I couldn't make up my mind whether I liked the Brennan bursting into tears bit or not, but I'm glad you approved. \o/

[guardedheart]

o.m.g. *flaillll*

i loved this. scratch that, i'm IN love with this. you have their characters so spot on! this is seriously only your second bones fic? please oh pleeeeeeease write a continuation and/or another story!!

excuse me as i must read it again now.

[rosie_not_rose]

Aww thanks! Yeah this is my second Bones fic, although my first proper one really, as I've only written one short chapter of the other so far. So glad you like! =D