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rosie_not_rose

Bones: Step by step, we go together (1/?)

Oct 15, 2009 00:48

Title: Step by step, we go together (1/?)
Pairing: B/B
Rating: T
Word Count: 2743
Beta: bastetseye
Summary: Booth has recovered from his brain tumor, and everything seems to be slotting back into place. However; when Booth and Brennan go undercover in a hotel, it becomes very apparent that something about Booth has changed. Involves an actual case, too ( ( Read more... )

bones - oh my freaking god, fan fiction

Comments 24

bastetseye October 15 2009, 00:57:42 UTC

Other than reading aloud passages of her book, partly to Booth and partly for her own benefit,

Hee!

Like I said before, so not crap!

rosie_not_rose October 15 2009, 00:58:53 UTC

Hehe, thanks! I'm so glad you pointed that out, I had to change that line.

bastetseye October 15 2009, 01:00:33 UTC

Again, no problem.

It was fun, my first Beta-ing job! Now if only I could put that on a CV!

rosie_not_rose October 15 2009, 01:01:24 UTC

Haha I know right? Actually I still need to add your name to it - I was trying to work out the layout and LJ cut and everything (cos I suck at LJ) that I forgot to add you as a beta. *does so*

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silencing October 15 2009, 02:56:48 UTC

I really like your insight into Bones. I think it really suits her, especially after all the emotional growing she has gone through.

Poor helpless Booth. If Bones needs to go to Guatemala, I will gladly step into take her place...I'm interning at the crime lab at the moment, you think I'll pass?

PS, when you do start including the case work, if you ever have forensics questions, I will gladly answer any since I do have some insight into it.

Great first chapter!

rosie_not_rose October 15 2009, 10:41:57 UTC

Thanks!

Ooh get you! That would be extremely helpful when I come to writing it. Although I think this story will be focusing on the B/B relationship, with the case a sort of background element. Mainly because Science was my absolute worst subject, and I'd find it very difficult! XD

silencing October 15 2009, 16:33:40 UTC

..Yea science makes me a happy person. And I completely understand focusing on their relationship because that's exactly what the show does. The case always seems secondary, or is it just me?

rosie_not_rose October 15 2009, 16:35:14 UTC

Totally true! And I'm pretty sure that most people are watching it mainly for the relationships and people rather than the case. Although without the case, it wouldn't be nearly as interesting!

Thread 10

kialasphynxea October 15 2009, 08:47:16 UTC

I'm in love ♥

This was great, keep it up :DD Love your Bones personification, not sure if that's the right word right now- but i'm tired and going to sleep, had to read this first though :)

rosie_not_rose October 15 2009, 10:42:21 UTC

Ooh, thanks a lot. =D

makd October 16 2009, 06:50:04 UTC

well done, with excellent insight into Brennan's motivations.

rosie_not_rose October 16 2009, 15:27:10 UTC

Thanks!

Bones: Step by step, we go together (1/?) loving_nancy November 13 2009, 11:32:05 UTC

Oh man. That was insanely great. I am loving your Bones fics. I haven't found many writers who do Bones justice but you definitely do!! Can't wait for updates!!! :)

~Nikayla

Re: Bones: Step by step, we go together (1/?) rosie_not_rose November 13 2009, 11:33:32 UTC

Awww, thanks very much! =D