Brave New World - 4/4

Oct 16, 2009 08:07

Title: Brave New World - 4/4
Characters: Rose, Ten, 10.5, Donna, Jackie
Summary: This was written for The Shadow Proclamation, who won two fics during the Support Stacie auction. The prompt was: post-JE, the Doctor gives Rose a choice. She can stay with him on the TARDIS, or stay with 10.5 in the parallel world. What will she do?
Rating: PG
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callme_al01 October 16 2009, 12:38:14 UTC
Awww!

Can't wait for the next story.

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rosewarren October 16 2009, 21:12:48 UTC
Thank you! This was a fun one to finish up.

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teruel_a_witch October 16 2009, 14:47:47 UTC
*sigh* very thoughtful ending, they still have so much to make right but at least they've got hope and each other)

She holds her hand out to him anyway, surprised and pleased to realize that he was holding his out to hers at the same time. She curls her fingers into his hand, feeling the strength of it, the warmth of his skin. The steady single beat of his heart through the veins in his wrist. She moves to stand close beside him, their hands entwined and their bodies touching as they face the unknown together.

Awww, such a lovely imagery <33

Boo, you deprived Doctor of his multi-linguist ability, that was my favorite one *iz pouting* ;D

Will be watching for the sequel))

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rosewarren October 16 2009, 21:13:29 UTC
Well, he doesn't speak Norwegian, obviously. But I'm sure in over 900 years, he's picked up a few other languages. :)

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teruel_a_witch October 16 2009, 21:47:35 UTC
It just would be so sexy if he did xD Boy he makes me all hot and bothered even when he speaks with the Judoon or that insect-ish thing-y from POD*Guh* I *love* multi-linguist men *dreamy sigh*

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dark_aegis October 16 2009, 15:02:58 UTC
That was absolutely lovely. I like how this time it was Rose's choice to decide to stay, and I feel for poor 10.5. I look forward to the sequel!

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rosewarren October 16 2009, 21:14:07 UTC
Thank you! I think they'll have doubts about their decisions, but it should all work out in the end.

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rowofstars October 16 2009, 16:21:02 UTC
Ooo a sequel!!

Lovely ending and I'm excited for the next story.

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rosewarren October 16 2009, 21:14:38 UTC
Thank you! The sequel is about what happens to Ten now, per The Shadow Proclamation's request.

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amberfocus October 16 2009, 16:49:14 UTC
I like your take on this. A little angsty, a lot of uncertainty. Why didn't he bring a piece of the TARDIS with him, though? Not enough time when he expected to have enough with Donna when he snuck back into the ship? I'm sure he could build something, though. Even if it's just a jet engine for an airplaine. He's still got to be brilliant enough to do that. Then they could travel faster. Curious to see the sequel.

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rosewarren October 16 2009, 21:19:34 UTC
Well, he was assuming that he'd get back on the TARDIS once Rose said goodbye. So he and Donna weren't prepared for her change of heart. I suspect he'll get over not having a TARDIS once he settles into being a human. And if he doesn't, yes, he'll soup up a zeppelin or invent the first airplane in Pete's world, just to give himself something to do. :)

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