Hamburger Hands, an Arashi fanfiction

[rosesnwine88]

Title: Hamburger Hands, an Arashi fanfiction
By: rosesnwinee88
Length: 159 words (Drabble)
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Summary: Aiba had a reflection as they lay on the bed...
A/N: I want double cheese burger now! xD

Comments

[archuaddict]

tee hee. i didn't know Nino had chubby hands? LOL. i loved it! <3

[rosesnwine88]

do you even know who nino is?!
haha...
http://pics.livejournal.com/syri_chii/pic/0003pxar/
did i put that pic right?

[rosesnwine88]

the pic is not mine by the way... >.

[deelovesryo]

nevertheless, thanks for sharing it, it's sooo cute!

[deelovesryo]

love it, it's really sweet and funny in a cute way!
Thanks for sharing <3

[rosesnwine88]

aww... thank you~ for reading, too... ^^,

[nijimirai]

ooh i think i see a spelling mistake! O:

i think it's meant to be "big fuss" and "about"? (the first line)

and "Nino's hands are his." ^^

haha but thanks for sharing~!! ^^ it's so simple and gets the point across XD

[rosesnwine88]

...god, i'm stupid... *blushes at the mistake*
going to fix it now, thank you~! (for reading and pointing out the mistake)^^,

[nijimirai]

you're not stupid, it happens to everybody ^^ even me sometimes ^^;;

maybe you might want to look for someone to help you? like a beta?

i think this community may help: http://community.livejournal.com/je_beta

[rosesnwine88]

haha~ sorry, it just slipped. it's a bad habit i have...

hmm... i'll keep that in mind, thanks!