What makes you think you got the dynamic wrong? I haven't noticed anything that seems off so far.
Definitely don't chuck everything and start over. You're doing a great job so far. Plus, remember you can always go back and fix things/make changes when you hit the revision stage. :)
I think it'd be fun to have some scenes in her POV.
As far as swapping out Marie-Therese... On the one hand, she hasn't had many scenes and they have been short but on the other hand, they have been really intriguing.
Puling Marie-Therese might be my knee-jerk reaction to the fear of having too many narrators, I'll admit. Still, I'll probably not make the official decision until the draft is finished. :)
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Definitely don't chuck everything and start over. You're doing a great job so far. Plus, remember you can always go back and fix things/make changes when you hit the revision stage. :)
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Thanks, hon. I think it's just that I've reached the saggy-middle part of the book.
I'm not really going to chuck anything, but I may end up throwing Sophia's POV into the mix (possibly swapping Marie-Therese out).
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As far as swapping out Marie-Therese... On the one hand, she hasn't had many scenes and they have been short but on the other hand, they have been really intriguing.
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