Comments | rosemaryandrue: A Profusion of Prefects (<strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/scarvesnhats">scarvesnhats</a></strong> Day 19)

rosemaryandrue

A Profusion of Prefects (scarvesnhats Day 19)

Oct 26, 2005 22:34

Title: A Profusion of Prefects
Rating: PG (for language)
Disclaimer: They're not mine. I'm just borrowing them.
Wordcount: 1460
Prompt: Bonfire

Notes: Sixth year. The Feast of St Frideswide.

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( In Which Lily Evans Claims to Have Been a Brownie... )

james, sirius, lily, scarves and hats, remus

Comments 23

ressa6778 October 27 2005, 16:45:02 UTC

Sirius grinned. He could already tell the evening would end with melted marshmallows stuck in people’s hair and charcoal up people’s shirts. Why worry about complicated things like emotions when the simple things were so good? So he fancied Remus. He’d think about it later. You could put problems off for years that way.

That ending was perfect.

rosemaryandrue October 27 2005, 16:47:02 UTC

Thanks :) Sirius really doesn't enjoy introspection.

moonix October 27 2005, 18:46:10 UTC

An orgy would be ideal. If everyone was involved no one would notice it was Remus he was most interested in.

*lol*

Oooh, another nice one. Don't have time to write long comments but, you know. I love it. The whole thing.

rosemaryandrue October 27 2005, 18:57:20 UTC

*grins* Sirius has a unique approach to problem solving.

Thanks :)

futurestarlette October 30 2005, 01:52:29 UTC

Hee, I remember being a brownie! We never had chocolate-dipped marshmallows, though. Not on. They sound good. :(

I love how you've worked Lily in. :) The interaction between her and the boys is fun and plausible.

Of course Sirius likes to burn things. XD

rosemaryandrue October 30 2005, 08:44:57 UTC

They were something we did at Guides. I was never allowed to eat them though :( Too sweet.

I think all teenage (and older!) boys like burning things. Some of them are just more gifted at it.

Thanks for the comment.

stellastars November 1 2005, 15:42:22 UTC

I love that Lily was a brownie; it's perfect for her. And the fact that the poor boys had no idea what she was talking about was very amusing.

I like Sirius' logic, especially..
An orgy would be ideal. If everyone was involved no one would notice it was Remus he was most interested in.
and
He'd think about it later. You could put problems off for years that way.

rosemaryandrue November 2 2005, 11:51:13 UTC

I have a lot of empathy for Lily. It sounds like she came from a fairly ordinary family. Her reaction to the Wizarding World must have been fascinating.

There's no flaw in his reasoning, as such ;) He's just starting from an unusual position.

Thanks for the comment.

shinzuku August 12 2007, 15:42:47 UTC

Is that an actaul holiday? I like the mention of the orgy, and the other two are clueless.