Comments | rosemaryandrue: A Hidden House (<strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/scarvesnhats">scarvesnhats</a></strong> Day 11)

rosemaryandrue

A Hidden House (scarvesnhats Day 11)

Oct 12, 2005 22:11

Title: A Hidden House
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: They're not mine *pouts*. I'm just borrowing them.
Wordcount: 1256
Prompt: Tree house!

Notes: Pre-slash. Sixth year. Grumpy, sleep-deprived Marauders in the rain.

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( In Which James Potter Abuses the English Language... )

james, sirius, scarves and hats, peter, remus

Comments 30

musesfool October 12 2005, 21:28:43 UTC

“He pedanted at me.”

“There’s no such verb,” Remus said, just to be aggravating.

“See! Pedantifier!”

Hee!

Funny and sweet and wistful.

rosemaryandrue October 13 2005, 07:55:08 UTC

Thank you. :)

doggy_shampoo October 12 2005, 21:55:59 UTC

sigh I love it. I love all their emotions in the story. so good :)

rosemaryandrue October 13 2005, 07:55:29 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :)

shaggydogstail October 12 2005, 22:41:04 UTC

Ooh, that was fun! I especially liked Sirius being paranoid about the paintings talking about him, “Half of them are my family,” . *snorts*

Nice.

rosemaryandrue October 13 2005, 08:02:55 UTC

And if they were they'd have plenty to say to him.

Thanks :)

amberlynne October 12 2005, 22:57:46 UTC

By the time he’d made it to the lake it was pissing it down. He slumped down on a boulder anyway. Let Sirius be self-righteous. It wasn’t like he ever had to be responsible for anything or look after anyone. He never - moon nights didn’t count!

Heee! Remus arguing with himself is too cute. I am going to start having nightmares about what's in that letter. *G* I am just adoring this whole world you have going on. The boys are so real and interesting. Just lovely.

rosemaryandrue October 13 2005, 08:04:27 UTC

^_^ I finally worked out the contents of the letter the other day. O_o

Poor old Remus. He tries to feel sorry for himself.

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you're enjoying them.

summersalts October 13 2005, 00:19:08 UTC

This series you're writing is really enjoyable. I do like how sweet and (fairly) gentle and school-ish the stories are. The bits of petulance in this fic are especially fun. Thanks!

rosemaryandrue October 13 2005, 08:15:59 UTC

I love school stories. I've been collecting them for years and always resented being of the wrong generation to ever write one.

Of course they're petulant. I get very sick of martyred-Remus. He's a teenage boy and therefore possessed of an immense capacity for self-pity ;)

Thanks for the comment :)