A Simple Sweetness (scarvesnhats Day 10)

[rosemaryandrue]

Title: A Simple Sweetness
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: They're not mine *pouts*. I'm just borrowing them.
Wordcount: 1115
Prompt: Summer was gone and the heat died down

Comments

[ltlredhairdgirl]

I haven't commented before, but I love this series you've started writing for these prompts. I really like the way you've incorporated Lily into them. It's not too forced or anything, if that makes sense.

Do you mind if I friend you?

[rosemaryandrue]

Of course not *friends you back*

I'm glad you're enjoying them. :)

[schwarzbrille]

A fantastic addition to the series. Your Lily is fantastic, and this sentence is especially well-worded:

Here, in the warm, ancient quiet of the old tower she could feel the faint ghosts of more archaic emotions, of what it meant to wait and trust.

Wonderful.

[rosemaryandrue]

Thanks. It was Lily's turn and she's one of the characters I really enjoy writing.

:)

[stellastars]

Oh, I'm so glad to see that you updated! And such a lovely update at that!

I loved Lily trying her best to help with Remus in her own way. It really made it clear that she has become part of the "group."

Plus, I loved that Sirius always checks on Remus. Very sweet.

I can't wait to see the next part!

[rosemaryandrue]

Thank you. Lily, from what we've seen of her, strikes me as the sort of person who'd want to do something, once she found out.

Yes, Sirius always checks and the others always cover for him.

Thanks :) *wanders off to ponder treehouses*

[amberlynne]

Awww. What a lovely glimpse of the Maurauders through Lily's eyes. Especially the stuff about her dealings with Sirius. Just lovely. And of course, Sirius looking out for his Moony. *dreamy sigh*

[rosemaryandrue]

Thanks :)

Of course Sirius checks. He's an old mother hen when he's in the mood.

[exiled_mind]

Wonderful as always. I adore your MWPP + Lily.

[rosemaryandrue]

Thank you :)