A Simple Solace (scarvesnhats Day 08)

[rosemaryandrue]

Title: A Simple Solace
Rating: Gen/PG
Disclaimer: They're not mine (shame). I'm just borrowing them.
Wordcount: 1039
Prompt: Hogsmeade weekend.
Notes: Pre-slash. Sixth year.

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Comments

[forever__rain]

lol i can see padfoot trying to escape to be with remus a bit more.great fic

[rosemaryandrue]

Thanks. I'm making patterns with point-of-view and it took me a while to work out two Sirius stories for the full moon.

[javajunkie13]

Of course, she’d have to be able to piss off for the rest of the month.

Haha, of course. ;) I love that, it's so very Sirius.

And I love how you have them all still sort of in an animal mind set after they transform back. Fabulous job. :)

[rosemaryandrue]

I don't see logic as being one of his strong points :)

It's implied in PoA that being an animal affects the way Sirius thinks (it confuses the Dementors anyway). I'd be surprised if that didn't linger a little.

Thanks for the comment :)

[stellastars]

Padfoot began to lift a leg. James leapt back, yelping, “Wanker!”
lol!
I loved that Sirius kept his prankster-quality while in dog-form.

[rosemaryandrue]

*grins* He's still Sirius, after all.

:) Thanks.

[juliette_kelley]

“Thinks he funny, doesn’t he?” Peter asked, nose twitching.

I really like your Peter; this image in particular made me smile. The entire MWPP dialogue is very natural and you've created a group dynamic with a lot of spirit. It's so much fun to read! :)

[rosemaryandrue]

Group dynamics are fun :) They're just that bit messier and so more interesting to play with.

Thanks for the comment.

[amberlynne]

I love how their animal forms carry over in to their personalities for a time after they change back. Especially Peter and his skitteriness. And I love Sirius and his devious mind plotting to do nice things for his Moony. Very nicely done. :)

[rosemaryandrue]

Devious Sirius is one of my favourite recipes for disaster ^_^

Thanks :)