A Simple Solution (scarvesnhats Day 07)

[rosemaryandrue]

Title: A Simple Solution
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: They're not mine (shame). I'm just borrowing them.
Wordcount: 1048
Prompt: Here
Notes: Pre-slash. Sixth year.

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Comments

[javajunkie13]

Woo! Go Remus! This is great, the dialogue is just spot on. And I love

“I had an idea while I was asleep.

it's just so Sirius, his mind is always going. Fabulous. :)

[rosemaryandrue]

Thanks. I can just imagine him dreaming about stupid pranks and then trying to work out how to do them.

[exiled_mind]

Yay! You've captured them so perfectly :)

[rosemaryandrue]

Thank you :)

By the way, I love your icon. That's a wonderful quote.

[exiled_mind]

Thanks :)

[jadis31]

I love Sirius' smutty eyelashes :D

The whole thing was adorable. Thanks, it made me smile.

[rosemaryandrue]

Thank you :)

[nellie_darlin]

Fab. Brilliant dialogue, fast and pacy and sweet and Them. I was almost disappointed that James woke up, it destroyed the Remus-and-Sirius-ness.

[rosemaryandrue]

Thank you. One of the reasons I like reading fic from this era is because it's all little moments.

I'm glad the dialogue works - it's one of the things that I know I need to work at.

[dolabellae]

Your dialogue doesn't come across as something you need to work at! I'm very jealous of it...

[amberlynne]

Sirius, in his usual fashion, was sprawled across his bed, bare feet thrust out of the end, hair spread across his pillow, blankets knotted and clutched close. His lashes were smutty against his cheeks and his lips were slightly parted.

Oh, so lovely, that.

I love the interaction between them. You do the Maurauder voices so well! Especially the way the pester Remus just like it's any other day. Such boys! Excellent stuff. :)

[rosemaryandrue]

Thanks. They're sweet when they're asleep ;)

I'm glad you liked it. Normality on this sort of day is one of the things they give Remus, I think.

*digs out a Potterpuff icon to match*