Comments | rosemaryandrue: A Simple Sneeze (<strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/scarvesnhats">scarvesnhats</a></strong> Day 06)

rosemaryandrue

A Simple Sneeze (scarvesnhats Day 06)

Oct 07, 2005 17:32

Title: A Simple Sneeze
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: Not mine
Wordcount: 860
Prompt: sick
Notes: Sixth-year. Pre-Slash. The first half - the second half will answer today's prompt. There were days when Remus really wished he had stayed in bed.

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( In Which Peter Pettigrew Fails to Eat His Breakfast Fast Enough... )

severus, lily, regulus, sirius, james, scarves and hats, remus, peter

Comments 24

schwarzbrille October 7 2005, 16:58:48 UTC

I look forward to your posts so much! I adore the way you write the characters, and you seem to always strike that balance between sober and humourous. I especially loved James shouting out, "Good show!" It's so... it's just so damn James. ^_^

Fantastic, as always.

rosemaryandrue October 7 2005, 17:27:14 UTC

Thank you. I love these characters. This one was really fun for me because I finally had a chance to let my Slytherins appear.

*pets James* There is no such thing as too much James.

Glad you liked it.

penknife October 7 2005, 17:50:00 UTC

I'm really enjoying this series -- you're really pulling me in, and I love this one particularly. Sirius is being so ... Sirius.

rosemaryandrue October 7 2005, 18:01:55 UTC

Sirius had been behaving himself a little too much until now.

Glad you're enjoying them :)

amberlynne October 7 2005, 18:16:51 UTC

I love everything about this. A quiet Sirius is a dangerous Sirius, for sure. And I love the Lily/James interaction. Heh. That letter gets more intriguing by the day!

rosemaryandrue October 7 2005, 20:44:35 UTC

And a brooding Sirius is most dangerous of all.

Glad you're enjoying it.

omgsubtext October 7 2005, 19:23:29 UTC

There were times when Remus blamed all his lackings as a prefect on his inability to loom.

Heehee. Absolutely brilliant, all of it.

rosemaryandrue October 7 2005, 20:47:25 UTC

Thank you. Poor Remus - he must have hated being a prefect.

dolabellae October 8 2005, 12:05:43 UTC

I think this is my favourite of your 'scarvesnhats' so far (although I am hugely envious of your ability to produce so much good stuff in so short a time!) probably because of the Slytherin presence.

But I did also love Remus starting to correct James on 'decimate,' because it's both completely in character and one of my own pet niggles, and his last minute turn to Lily...

rosemaryandrue October 8 2005, 12:17:12 UTC

I love writing Slytherins. Gryffindors are so raucous ^_^

I've really being enjoying these. I really thought I was going to struggle to produce something every day but I'm finding it's making me very disciplined.

Misuse of decimate is one of my pet hates, too.

Thanks for the comment.