Comments | rosemaryandrue: A Twilight Wooing (<strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/scarvesnhats">scarvesnhats</a></strong> Day 05)

rosemaryandrue

A Twilight Wooing (scarvesnhats Day 05)

Oct 27, 2006 00:56

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Title: A Twilight Wooing
Rating: PG
Words: 1111
Prompt: Here we lived and fed . . . not minding the little space, trod on each other like birds in a hole, elbowed our ways without spite, all talking at once or silent at once . . . but never I think feeling overcrowded, being as separate as notes in a scale ( Read more... )

sirius, tonks, scarves and hats, remus

Comments 17

mizzmarvel October 27 2006, 01:16:19 UTC

As she followed Bill out of the kitchen, she heard Remus say softly, “You remembered three things today.”

What a nice, quiet moment.

rosemaryandrue October 27 2006, 09:17:36 UTC

*smiles* Thank you :)

vera_dicere October 27 2006, 01:24:19 UTC

o, i love your characterisations! you don't write tonks like some complete slut/airhead who's trailing after remus like a lovesick kid- i love her! really all of them are amazing.

and the whole thing between remus and sirius is just fabulous. so exquisitely painful, for both of them. the tension and desire are so well balanced...and i just love them both!! *hugs*

keep up the good work! :)

rosemaryandrue October 27 2006, 09:42:25 UTC

I really like Tonks, and always have done. I tend to write MWPP era, where it really doesn't matter that Remus might one day acquire a girlfriend, so I haven't really been caught up in all the Tonks-hate. Seems a bit daft to me.

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for commenting.

melandry October 27 2006, 01:26:09 UTC

All right, Tonks! I'm glad someone's gonna do something, because with Remus's plan he and Sirius were never getting anywhere! :-D

I like your Fleur, too, and the hint of young!Kingsley, who graces so many Marauders-era fics in amusing fashion.

rosemaryandrue October 27 2006, 09:59:14 UTC

*grins* Someone definitely needs to give them a boot up the arse.

I really enjoyed writing Fleur - I suddenly remembered that I liked her, and Kingsley is always fun, bless him.

Thanks for commenting :)

secretsolitaire October 27 2006, 01:28:02 UTC

“He’s gone,” Remus said, and if Tonks hadn’t known what a nice bloke he was, she could have sworn he was biting back laughter.

Ah, yes, this is how I like my Remus -- not *too* nice. :-)

Another great installment!

rosemaryandrue October 27 2006, 10:00:31 UTC

*snickers* She'll learn.

Thanks for commenting :) Glad you liked it.

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rosemaryandrue October 27 2006, 10:25:41 UTC

*shrugs* I like Tonks and she seems very outgoing. I think she would probably try to distract herself when she was panicking. I'm looking forward to writing about all of this lot. :)

Thanks for the comment :) I'm glad you're enjoying it.