Title: First Flight
Rating: Gen/PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. I believe in happy endings.
Wordcount: 1101
Prompt: Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.
-- William Cullen Bryant
Notes: Sixth year. Pre-slash. Hints of R/S and L/J. Transfigurations class. Not as autumnal as I wanted it to be.
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In Which Sirius Black Defends the Integrity of An Egg )
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I love the way you write The Maurauders as individuals, they way they interact with each other and then the more intimate moments with just Remus and Sirius.
And you desperately have me wondering what's in the letter and at the same time adoring Sirius for doing his best to ignore it. Heh. Remus going toe-to-toe with McGonagall and holding his own is too wonderful for words.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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The Marauders' interaction is important to me. I'm primarily a gen-writer so I like to see the relationships as part of a whole mess of other emotions and complications.
And you desperately have me wondering what's in the letter
Um. Yes. I have to the end of the month to figure something out.
Thanks for the comment.
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There's a real sense of camaraderie between the boys in this and it was a blast to read. Great job!
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Er. Sorry. Pet rant there ;)
Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it.
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Enjoying the stories very much--I love this transfiguration class! I love seeker!McGonagall, I love Remus' graceful floundering... good fun!
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Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you're enjoying them - I'm having great fun writing them.
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After a moment, he thought again. That sounded like he thought her hair was falling out. Like the firelight shining-
I completely cracked up after reading that. Poor James. :)
I am completely in love with your writing. I hope you don't mind if I friend you?
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Thanks for the comment. You are friended back ^_^
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“Are you trying to be clever in my class, Mr Lupin?”
“Shouldn’t I be, professor?” Remus asked and Sirius smirked.
Hehe, I love smart ass Remus.
You have such a fabulous understanding of the boys and their relationship with each other and it really shows through in your writing. Fabulous job. :)
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Glad you liked it.
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The feeling of friendship above any other thing is amazing, and I so like your Peter! as you, I've always gotten mad when people write him as a stupid, double-faced James worshipper; and it's only fair that someone will explain the reason of the Marauders trus in him. *ranting*
Anyway, I love your Smart Ass!Remus (as said by javajunkie), pseudoPoet!James and Ostracized!Sirius.
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I think sometimes we get so focussed on Sirius/Remus that we forget they were all friends and for a reason. Dorm-mates isn't enough - Harry's relationship with Dean and Seamus is not like the friendship between the Marauders.
Thanks for commenting.
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