This was an incredibly satisfying chapter. I love that when they finally manage to work things out, it's so understated (compared to all of their not working things out).
I think this is how it should be - understated and comfortable. They were friends first. They've still got some talking to do, of course, but things are drawing to a close.
I had expected this installment to be full of angst, and well, it's not. Darling boys. I love how Ted is so easygoing when he finds them. :) I so adore your Ted Tonks. And also your Alice.
I expected it to be angsty when I started writing it but it refused to go that way.
I've really enjoyed writing Ted and Alice and the others this month. Once I've finished the series I hoping to have a chance to write about them a bit more.
Meaning, wonderful job as always. And my little sister and cousin, bored and watching me read this, both proceeded to make fun of me when I meeped, "Eeeee! *claps hands* Kissy!"
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I've really enjoyed writing Ted and Alice and the others this month. Once I've finished the series I hoping to have a chance to write about them a bit more.
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I love the way you manage to include this wonderful happy moments amidst the plot, which is turning so tricky and wonderful and just woah over all. :)
Loved the chapter!
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I'm having fun with the plot now. Nearly there. :)
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Meaning, wonderful job as always. And my little sister and cousin, bored and watching me read this, both proceeded to make fun of me when I meeped, "Eeeee! *claps hands* Kissy!"
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