In deadly hate, the one against the other (3/3) (blanketforts Day 08)

Jan 09, 2006 23:09

Title: In deadly hate, the one against the other (3/3)
Rating: PG for language
Disclaimer: They're not mine. I'm just borrowing them because I like them.
Wordcount: 2465
Prompt: A soft breeze with the slippery concrete black and full of muddy slush, contrasting with the hoarfrost, clean and hung on a tunnel of silent shivering trees (the ones ( Read more... )

sirius, ted, remus, blanketforts

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bnh January 9 2006, 23:50:28 UTC
ehee! i keep picturing ted as a cowboy. i think it's the word "vigilante" that did it. :X

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rosemaryandrue January 10 2006, 00:06:04 UTC
Hee. *loves that image* It's the swooshy coat.

Damn, I now have an image of six-year-old Nymphadora in a cowboy hat that slides all the way down her nose, tripping over her shoelaces. My inner Andromeda is tutting. :)

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bnh January 10 2006, 00:10:30 UTC
AHAHA yes. perfect. :D

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schwarzbrille January 10 2006, 07:33:08 UTC
Cutest. Idea. EVER. *dies*

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rosemaryandrue January 10 2006, 09:45:44 UTC
The Ted thing is odd because you're not the first to say that. I wonder if it's crept into fanon somehow. I'm going with what Tonks says to Harry in OotP - 'My dad's Muggle-born and he's a right old slob.' Later on, Sirius refers to him as Muggle-born, too. Reading between the lines, I see Tonks as taking after her Dad more, so it seemed quite fun to have him as an Auror.

*sighs* Silly boys. Oh, well, we're only at the start of the month.

Thanks for the comment :)

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melayneseahawk January 10 2006, 01:59:55 UTC
Ooh! You described Kings Cross correctly! You made my day.

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rosemaryandrue January 10 2006, 11:10:39 UTC
I used to commute from platform 9. One of the things that made the long commute bearable was working out the logistics of it all in my head.

:)

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melayneseahawk January 10 2006, 20:22:05 UTC
Teehee.

The last time I was in London, the family and I went to Kings Cross on pilgrimage. We have pictures of the platform. Heh.

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rosemaryandrue January 10 2006, 20:28:18 UTC
*grins*

*points to her LJ layout*

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jadis31 January 10 2006, 02:48:24 UTC
Regulus was so cocky and young and Black to his core. Wonderful glimpse of him there. The action in this was great. The whole thing was kind of tense and exciting, and then the parts with Steven were just... heart breaking.

And I really love that everyone else talks about Remus and Sirius being together, but the two of them can't hold a conversation about it to save their lives.

Is this plotted to last through January? Are there really going to be 31 full parts of this for us? Wow. I think I've found my new favorite month. <3

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nekare January 10 2006, 07:25:32 UTC
You mean you haven't read the prequel?

Oh God, we must fix this. read it here.

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rosemaryandrue January 10 2006, 11:35:36 UTC
*blushes*

*hides*

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jadis31 January 10 2006, 23:40:23 UTC
a whole other story with these same characterizations and in this time line? Why, dear GOD, why must I have to work tonight?? What did I ever do to deserve this kind of punishment from you?!?

Okay, enough with the dramatic. But Thanks for the link. As soon as I get some time, you KNOW I will be all over it ;)

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nekare January 10 2006, 07:22:23 UTC
Your Alice is great and the action was so vivid and wonderful, feeling completely real.

The fact that everyone just assumes they're together amuses me to no end (it reminds me to the prefect meetings, back in scarvesnhats :)) and wee! The Order makes it appearance.

And just where is that adorable girl that stole Remus' jumper?!

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rosemaryandrue January 10 2006, 11:49:47 UTC
Little Nym will definitely be appearing, even if I have to mutilate a prompt to make it happen. :)

I so often see Alice Longbottom, dowdy housewife, so I really wanted to write Alice Longbottom, famous Auror.

And the Order *grins* Finally, the Order. This is going to be such fun ^_^

:) Thanks for the comment.

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