Poker Face 1: Second Person

[rosefyre]

Prompt: Second Person
Universe: The Boolpropian Round Robin Legacy: Generation Nine
Word Count: 932
Notes: Takes place during Part Three, from a different perspective - spoilery if you haven't finished reading, though since I finished in March, you should be done by now. The first book mentioned is The Going-To-Bed Book, by Sandra Boynton.

Comments

[lauriempress]

I loved this! You did a good job with your card!

[rosefyre]

Thanks! Only four more to go. :P

[lilycobalt]

Awwww :D It's nice to see what goes through Astraea's head as she settles in with the family and decides to help.

[rosefyre]

:) Glad you enjoyed!

[leilia]

Nice job with the second person. That is honestly the hardest POV to write from because it can come off so odd.

It's nice to see Astraea's POV.

[rosefyre]

Agreed, second person is hard. I don't think I'd want to write anything in it longer than a short fic - it's just too exhausting, both to read and to write.

I was glad to be able to put out a bit of Astraea's POV - it's something we can't see in the chapters, for a variety of reasons, but she's important and always will be.

Thanks!

[katmiesterk8]

For such a difficult POV to write you did well with this. It didn't feel odd to read at all!

[rosefyre]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)