Work in Progress

[rose_in_despair]

Yesterday during one of my classes i began writing a poem... but all i have is the beginning for now...

Lies have cause my heart to bleed
Slowly taking away all i need
Listening to the angels die
As raven tears my eyes do cry

Release me from this hell-bound hold
Shelter me from the wicked and cold

Comments

[crimsonfaerie]

I like it so far... It's very dark. Very emotional. P.S. Was the song you were thinking of "My Immortal"? Yanno, the slow one? I'm pretty sure. :)