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rose0mary

Next Speedwriting grouping

Aug 27, 2013 15:22

TITLE: Undisciplined Antics
SERIES: Transformers Prime
CHARCTERS: Knockout, Starscream
RATING: K+
SUMMARY: Knock-Out almost surpasses the limited back-talk and unproductive activity Megatron tolerates with his current scheme to reduce boredom.
PROMPT 1 - When least expected, a character demonstrates a hitherto unknown and unanticipated talent.

( Undisciplined Antics )

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Comments 4

silberstreif August 28 2013, 08:44:24 UTC

Aw cute little 'splashes'.

The first one was really funny. :) I can so see them all acting like this.

The second one... I don't know why but all I thought was: Poor steps. ^^"

Three was interesting. Because at first it was funny, but the sentence: Treasons for speaking the truth? Well, the news give the answer to that and it's a loud 'Yes'.

Four: Cute. :D I can see them all trying to reach the sticks and First Aid smiling and despairing.

Five: Poor Cosmos. But at least he doesn't have a nose. And I expect the smell will wash off of metal easier than anything organic.

Six:*grin* Well, who doesn't love Prowl drawling and in the right? That's the Prowl feel. ^^

rose0mary August 29 2013, 01:30:12 UTC

Undisciplined Antics I wrote what I saw. And I saw Knock-out tormenting poor Starscream. In a playful manner, of course.

Shifting Shadows Trying to write from an OBJECT's point-of-view, harder than I thought it would be. (and yes, poor steps: those bots weight a ton!).

Impossible Choices I could have pulled it off without the 'TREASON? For telling the truth?'?? Huh, it didn't seem to work without that line.
And yes, it would have been a government 'secret' he would have revealed WITHOUT AUTHORIZATION if he'd talked to anyone.

oppsie-daisy Thanks for your kind words. I love the fact I got them in character.

Let the animals be Poor Cosmos indeed. Being stuck in space, he didn't get the same 'avoid these creatures' lecture the others did.
On the other servo, the Autobots now know WHY some of the organic animals are labeled 'obnoxious: avoid at all costs' instead of 'dangerous: do not harass'
True. Metal doesn't have the same chemical reaction to skunk spray that people and pets do. But the smell lingers!

Fabulous ( ... )

anonymous August 29 2013, 00:35:08 UTC

Undisciplined Antics - a giggler. ^^

Shifting Shadows - definitely a bit eerie.

Impossible Choices - Might explain a bit about where Leo went. I really didn't like how some of the human characters disappeared without explanation between one movie and the next.

I liked the others, but I think the 1st three were my faves.

Starfire201

rose0mary August 29 2013, 01:19:53 UTC

Glad you enjoyed Undisciplined Antics I had fun writing that one.
Actually, I had fun writing all of them.

Shifting Shadows, Eerie, yep. I had in my mind to do an episode from the view of the stairs, but just couldn't do it justice. So, I compromised on that one.

Impossible Choices Oh definitely!
I don't always like how series will introduce characters, then Not use them in the next - and there is no reason NOT to include them, because they didn't 'die' on-screen.

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