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But Broken Lights - Chapter Two

Jul 01, 2007 20:59

Title: But Broken Lights 2/11
Characters: Ten, Rose

Rating: PG-13

Spoilers: Series Two and the tie-in novel The Stone Rose

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Comments 6

tiny_disk July 2 2007, 09:40:34 UTC

Loving this fic!! Brilliant dynamic between the two, very funny - more please!!! :D

dettiot July 2 2007, 13:13:54 UTC

I am just loving this fic so much. I love the characterization of Rose and the Doctor, and getting this glimpse into their lives post-Age of Steel.

Ball of string, labyrinth - I figure, why mess with a classic?”

Hee! I love Rose. :-)

Can't wait for the next part!

kesshin_shinobu July 2 2007, 20:05:27 UTC

“I think you can trust someone named ‘The Doctor’ to know his definite articles, don’t you?”

If that line was a person, I would date it. Possibly marry it. XD
I love this fic, rosa_acicularis. It's witty and cute. So many fics don't give you any space to breathe, you know what I mean? This one rambles about quite nicely, just a little adventure with the Doctor and Rose. I'm looking forward to the next bit. :)

jlrpuck July 3 2007, 02:30:19 UTC

Ah, Rose, I'm loving reading this as a serial. It gets better with every read...and even knowing how the story goes, I find myself getting impatient for the next chapter.

So hurry up and post again soon! Oh, and, er.....when are you starting that follow-up?

kb91 July 3 2007, 04:58:44 UTC

Oh my. I remember reading the first part to this long ago, when I stumbled across it while reading another entry in your LJ. I'm so happy you are working on it again in earnest. I'm really looking forward to more.

But ... 11 parts? And that's just the first of four stories? I'm not sure whether to fall down on my knees and thank you, or run far away until it's completely finished. I usually prefer to read stories all at once so I can devour them whole (and because I've been burned too many times by authors who get into the meatiest part of a wonderful story and go AWOL), but you are such a talented writer that I can't resist. :)

More, please? :)

rosa_acicularis July 3 2007, 05:51:53 UTC

I too have had my heart broken by authors who abandon works mid-series. All I can promise is that I have a back-up plot conclusion just in case after BBL is posted I find I've been to ambitious for my own good. There will be no unending cliffhangers here. No, really. I'd pinky swear on it.

Thank you so much for your comments. More coming up, very soon. ;)