Fic: The Days Are Just Packed 1/2

Jul 30, 2010 23:23

Title: The Days Are Just Packed

Characters: Rose Tyler, Tenth Doctor II, Jackie Tyler, Pete Tyler, Tony Tyler.

Rating: Teen.

Warnings: None.

Spoilers: Journey's End.

Beta: Much thanks as always to eponymous_rose, who rocks my socks.

Summary: “It’s a cruel season that makes you get ready for bed while it’s light out.” - Bill Watterson, Calvin and Hobbes. Written ( Read more... )

fandom: doctor who, fic

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fishface44 July 31 2010, 06:48:04 UTC
There are not enough words to tell you how much I adore this fic!!!! To think I almost went to be without checking LJ again!!!!!

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fishface44 July 31 2010, 06:48:27 UTC
AND I got to be first!!!! *throws confetti*

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rosa_acicularis August 1 2010, 18:28:02 UTC
*awards you first comment prize*

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. ;)

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momentmusical July 31 2010, 07:08:13 UTC
THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR HOW AMAZING THIS IS.

Tony and Rose and the Doctor and Lydia, the TARDIS police box and the Doctor's reaction, Jackie's quip about the plunger - ohhh, they're all simply magnificent. Seriously, I keep trying to come up with better words but I come up short each time.

I very eagerly await the next installment :D.

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rosa_acicularis August 1 2010, 18:30:01 UTC
YAY. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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mylittlepwny July 31 2010, 07:23:06 UTC

Tony runs up beside them, out of breath and carrying an armful of tea towels. He stops, watching the Doctor’s delicate grip on the battered cardboard. The way his hands linger.

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Rose kneels beside the Doctor on the grass, the ground warm and still beneath her knees. She slides her palm along the tense line of his back. “Five years,” she says. “Almost to the day.”

“Yeah,” he says, softly. Then he turns. Touches his forehead to hers. “Help me find the right shade of blue?”

She smiles, and the sun shines warm on their backs.

This whole, beautiful thing was the bees fucking knees, but oh oh oh this bit in particular was just. Is just. I just.

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rosa_acicularis August 1 2010, 18:31:32 UTC
Incoherence is the highest form of flattery. Thanks as ever for reading, dude. ;)

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I have so much love for this fic! chic_shine July 31 2010, 08:48:05 UTC
This is beyond words wonderful! I am in awe to your grasp of the characters, your dialogue which is epic and your general expertise when it comes to flow in fic.

I love how sweet the Doctor and Rose are to each other, I love space legs, I love that Rose had a ninja turtle phase, I love the jam/marmalade in back pockets, I love that Lydia and Tony found each other and I am eagerly awaiting the next part where all the subtle hints on both Roses impending fears and Lydia's home are resolved. Case in fact I Love this fic.

Also MOAR Rose/Doctor goodness please!

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Re: I have so much love for this fic! rosa_acicularis August 1 2010, 18:47:22 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading. ;)

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