Trek Fic: Component Parts, 2b.

Aug 29, 2009 18:12

Title: Component Parts

Fandom: Star Trek Reboot.

Notes: Livejournal hates the size of my chapters.

chapter two, part b. )

fandom: star trek, fic

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recumbentgoat August 30 2009, 02:41:36 UTC
this is an amazing, amazing piece of work. well written and thoughtful--just a great story. i love gaila, i love the banter--i love Uhura's backstory. wonderful!

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vega_ofthe_lyre August 30 2009, 03:21:11 UTC
Oh my God, my dear, you are a genius, this is just brilliant and your Uhura is amazing and the whole thing just had me bouncing up and down with glee. YES. Thank you for a lovely read so far.

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renaitrefille August 30 2009, 03:32:05 UTC
Oh god I know just how Uhura feels. I feel like I could babble forever, I'm so drained! But I think that made me connect with this more. I really love this piece :D

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tamarinadc August 30 2009, 04:00:27 UTC
Such a great story so far- the characterizations are spot-on and believable. I was impressed with your first chapter, but this one confirms just how good a writer you are. I eagerly await your next installment!

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teljhin August 30 2009, 04:56:44 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy to see this updated. :D Uhura is so awesome here, she feels so alive and full of breath and wonder and so so human. Not that, you know, I think she was being written like a robot or non-human previously, but I hope you get my drift. o_O; Either way, I love this chapter.

And you mentioned my arch nemesis, the Sapir-Whorf Hypothesis! Ooo how it burned to see Uhura defend it! Yet I'm so glad someone write about it in Trek fiction at all, haha. If that makes any sense. :)

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