Wow. I like the comparison to a sea snake because it is just so weird but so perfect, and the whole "hands that touch maps" bit and the contrast between Aslan and Caspian caused by sin. BEAUTIFUL :D
Sea snake!Caspian is a really strange mental image...I totally agree but I hope it works despite that.
I'm glad you like the "hands that touch maps" thing. It took me a while to get that entire sentence phrased right, but I'm glad I changed it. It was something like compasses instead of maps and then some other random nautical references. Thanks for commenting. :)
It does work. At first it struck me as slightly odd but then I SAW it in my mind so it was all good. Also, nautical references ftw when Caspian is at sea (and har har, the Caspian Sea).
Erotic? Really? And I thought I rated this PG...lol. I'm glad you think so. It's really simple, but I liked the way it sounded so it's in there. I'm glad you liked the other things too. Comments like yours make me want to write more. :)
Thank you. Totally inspired by the book and the fact that Caspian and sea snake both have an s sound in them. Not particularly brilliant though. *blush* You're too nice.
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I'm glad you like the "hands that touch maps" thing. It took me a while to get that entire sentence phrased right, but I'm glad I changed it. It was something like compasses instead of maps and then some other random nautical references. Thanks for commenting. :)
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P.S. you're welcome! :D
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that is *really* erotic. I love every bit of this. The last line! Feeling no longer Just! Oh, wow. Awesome.
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That just did it for me. Love it!
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