Portraits of You

Jul 15, 2008 07:55

Title: Portraits of You
Pairing: Peter/Caspian
Rating: T
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Whenever Caspian can't sleep (and even when he can), he thinks about Peter. It's a comfort to him now though, he's only alive in his dreams.

Portraits of You )

fic:narnia, pairing:peter/caspian, rating:t

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politelypuzzled July 15 2008, 06:37:03 UTC
ummmm rory?

THIS MADE ME CRY

really it was so beautiful but so heart breaking....would you mind, i mean if you were up to it, writing an alternate ending when Cas actually meets Pete and how that contrasts to his views of him?

do you know what i mean?

i really would love/appreciate it if you gave it a shot...if you have time and am feeling what im saying

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roryevans July 15 2008, 08:23:03 UTC
When I first read your suggestion I was like ehhh probably not. But then the little plot bunny started bouncing around and yeah, I will totally do it. Maybe even today. It's like 10 AM here and raining so I have plenty of free time. Yay. Now I'm excited about this. Have any other prompt-y things?

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politelypuzzled July 15 2008, 19:33:30 UTC
haha you just cant escape me

lol

um do you mean in general or for this fic?
cos for this i vote theres a love triangle...maybe i actually dont know how i feel about that just yet, but im in a pretty big pete/ed mood at the mo so i shouldnt be letting it distract me. really tho, just cas anazlyzing the real pete with his own thought up pete would be wonderful, they're meeting should probably be like the one in the movie, unless you have a better idea (which im sure you do)

otherwise just run with it, youre sucha saint it'll turn out great anyway you write it

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roryevans July 15 2008, 20:31:28 UTC
Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh.

I am almost completely done with this Peter/Edmund thing I'm writing. AND it features a love triangle! Well, sort of. It's like a misunderstood three-some...

I was thinking about starting it out like they do in the movie and going from there. It'll probably turn out completely different but I'm so going to write it because the idea won't leave me alone till I do. Thanks for that.

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jademercy July 15 2008, 16:50:48 UTC
Huh. That was interesting...in a good way. Very sad too...if you write the alternate mentioned in previous reviews, I will most definately read it.

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roryevans July 15 2008, 20:33:51 UTC
Thanks. Well, that's two people now so I guess I pretty much have to write it. It'll probably (hopefully) end on a happier note.

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gogothgirl July 15 2008, 17:00:04 UTC
i cant believe this. i just cant. i'm actually crying over a caspian/peter fic. that has NEVER happened before!! ooohhh dangit.

curse miraz and his men.

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roryevans July 15 2008, 21:17:37 UTC
Aww. I probably shouldn't be happy that you're crying because of my writing should I? But I'm flattered. Emotions are always a concern for me since I don't know how they turn out for other people.

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_profiterole_ July 15 2008, 18:26:47 UTC
I like how Caspian loved Peter even before meeting him, a meeting that will not happen because you're so mean! *pouts*

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roryevans July 15 2008, 21:20:50 UTC
Lol. Yeah, I know but I love writing The Angst. Hate reading it, though. I will try to write them meeting each other and hopefully that'll end better than this...well, it kind of has to since this ended in death, but I'll see what I can do.

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alaszyel July 21 2008, 05:05:23 UTC
Beautiful and heartbreaking... you're fantastic, as usual.

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roryevans July 23 2008, 20:16:37 UTC
Aww *blush*. Thank you. <3

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