Fic: Sentire (5/9)

[roquentine]

Title: Sentire (5/9)
Author: Ella Jane
Characters: Nine/Rose, Jack
Chapter Rating: NC-17
Series Rating: NC-17
Timeline: AU from The Doctor Dances
A/N: People have already started picking up on this, but at the risk of being spoilery, this series is going to get dark fairly soon. (Not this part. This part is just smut! The smut before the storm, perhaps

Comments

[dark_aegis]

Wow. Even though that was as gorgeous as always I can't help but feel like I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. I can't wait for the next installment!

[roquentine]

Thank you! And yes, it's about time to start taking cover... alas!

[wendymr]

ARGH!!!

*tries to scroll down*

You had to stop there? Cruel, woman, cruel!

You know, the only thing wrong with that final scene is that the Doctor should have been inside Rose from the front ;) In fact, once she started to move towards him I thought that's what she was trying to achieve *grin*

I loved Jack watching them and finding it an incredible turn-on, and I loved Rose needing far less coaxing and protection than Jack imagined - sliding herself against him, the naughty thing. She's really enjoying herself.

But still the Doctor... again, that little hint that all isn't well:
he could never get enough of it, of this, of her.

He could never, really, get enough.

So there's darkness coming, and I see the chapter-count's gone up, too. Darkness is fine by me, though, just as long as I get a happy ending :)

[ambrosia_1]

You know, the only thing wrong with that final scene is that the Doctor should have been inside Rose from the front

I'm sure that's on the menu ;-)

[roquentine]

*evil laugh* That was the meanest chapter break of the series, I think, but I just couldn't help myself! And voyeur!Jack is indeed fun, though let's face it, he probably gets turned on by the Discovery Channel... ;)

[rose_cat]

let's face it, he probably gets turned on by the Discovery Channel... ;)

Oh, let's not go there, please! :P :)

Another great chapter. Innovative :D

[dragonmom64]

Guuuuuhhhhh!!!!

Damn...that was very hot!!

More,more,more!

[roquentine]

Thank you! (Can I get you an ice water??) :)

[phdelicious]

I've been killing time at the airport today and just read this straight through from the beginning for the first time. I really should know better than to read things like this in public as I'm sure I'm bright red with rather glazed eyes at the moment. Very hot, and this bit was well handled.

You've got a very interesting setup going here and I'm curious to see what you do with it.

[roquentine]

Ha, that is awesome! I hope no one was looking over your shoulder. *giggles* Thanks for joining the story, I'm glad you're liking it so far!

[almosttomorocco]

So... I've just finished reading all (so far) five parts.

Brilliant, Brilliant stuff. All of it.

Sorry for the bit of gush, but the fic has rendered me a bit incoherent... ;P

[roquentine]

Never a need to apologize for either gushing OR incoherence. I take both as the highest praise. :) Thanks for catching up, I hope you continue to enjoy it!

[almosttomorocco]

Oh, I'm sure I will. And CURSE you for stopping where you did! :P

OH- something I left out of the first one... you characterizations are DEAD on, and it kills me ded. In that good, fangirl kinda way. ;P

[roquentine]

Oh, thank you so much! In all seriousness, I do take characterization compliments as the highest praise, because I do pay closer attention to that when I'm writing than almost anything else. I'm so glad they are working for you!