Oh. Oh my. That was. Oh. (This is me, incoherent after reading that ;)) Gorgeous stuff, that. So very Jack, asking her to properly 'welcome him', and so very Nine, asking how welcome she made him. Good on Rose for calling him on it. And the rest. Yes. Did I mention the 'oh my'? I can't wait for the next installment :)
Thank you so much for your very kind words! This truly has been in the works for more than a year, and the fact that I'm finally posting it is freaking me out a little, so I extra-appreciate the comment! The next part should be up tomorrow... :)
Oooh, I like this. And I particularly like that you made a point of him not saying 'Are you sure?' I hate that cliché, even though I know the impulse that brings it on. But I'm really looking forward to the rest of this.
Thank you! It makes me happy that you picked up on something that was indeed a very conscious choice. I'm glad you liked it, and thank you so much for commenting!
Yes! I love fics in which Rose calls his bluff. Gonna be possessive, Doc? Then bloody do something about it! Excellent beginning, and I can't wait for the rest.
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I've done that myself a couple of times - sometimes you almost have to acknowledge the cliché in order to say, "We're not going to do that!"
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Seriously. (How badly did we want Rose to do this in canon? Sigh.) Glad you liked it!
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