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Fic: Watch Your Step (You'll Need A Miracle)

Jan 28, 2011 06:22

Title: Watch Your Step (You'll Need A Miracle)
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries.
Pairing/Characters: Tyler/Katherine, established-Jeremy/Tyler, implied-Jeremy/Katherine.
Rating: NC-17.
Warnings: Dub-Con, Implied Non-Con, Bloodplay, Violence, Rough Sex.
Words: 11,350.
Summary: AU. Post-The Sacrifice. When Katherine meets Tyler and sees the way his ( Read more... )

rating: nc 17, pairing: jeremy/tyler, pairing: tyler/katherine, .het, fandom: the vampire diaries, pairing: jeremy/katherine, .au, .slash, !fic

Comments 29

scorpiod1 January 28 2011, 13:06:57 UTC

I AM SO PROUD OF YOU, HEATHER. SO PROUD OF YOU FOR WRITING AND POSTING AND GETTING THIS DONE! MY LITTLE BABY SPARROW HAS LEARNED TO FLY! (lol, people are going to see this long-ass comment and be all O.o at us). But really, watching this be completed, after all the hard work I know you put in-it’s amazing. I am so proud of you, babe <333333333333

I honestly don’t know what I can say, because you know I love this and you heard all my thoughts on this and my favorite lines, so I will just point out my favorite things about this :D

Katherine. YOUR KATHERINE IS SO ON-POINT. I could hear her saying the lines, and you’ve captured her crazy, twisted mind and her cruelty and her playfulness, and how she ruins everything. Seriously, I am in awe of your Katherine voice. You write her so well, I worry I’m not doing my Katherine justice ( ... )

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opheliahyde February 6 2011, 02:00:00 UTC

I'm really sorry for the lateness of this reply. I've literally stared at your comment every day for a week or so, trying to figure out how to answer it. I kept worrying about rambling at you about everything because your comment is so fabulous and made me really think about everything and I just decided to go for it. I hope you don't get annoyed /o ( ... )

feathertofly January 28 2011, 21:53:41 UTC

UNF. I love this. So hot and achey breaky. I always forget how much I LOVE Tyler/Jeremy. And KATHERINE. HOW SO FLAWLESS, BB? ♥

opheliahyde January 30 2011, 04:28:52 UTC

KATHERINE ATE MY BRAIN. She basically made this fic possible with her crazycakes ways. I'm really glad you liked this. Jeremy/Tyler makes me happy in my soul. THANK YOU SO MUCH! <33333333

mary_greenman January 29 2011, 01:50:52 UTC

OMG. I've been really busy today, so I haven't had time to read much but from what I've read so far - amazing. I'll go back through and give you a proper review but I'm so happy I inspired something so well written. <3

opheliahyde January 30 2011, 04:30:36 UTC

It's okay, bb! Take your time. I'm just extremely grateful you prompted this (because it ate my brain) and I really hope you like the rest of it! :D

flwrpwr_vampyre January 29 2011, 03:45:59 UTC

I am crap at typing out my thinky thoughts about fic but this is incredible. You really delved into his mind and how he reacts to everything and it's rare to find a fic where the sex isn't my main reason to read it but this is one of them. I mean wow, the way she uses Jeremy against him and how he's powerless to resist over and over. And then him and Jeremy after. Amazing.

opheliahyde February 1 2011, 05:30:01 UTC

I understand your pain about figuring out how to write out your thoughts because I've spent the last few days trying to do exactly that with these comments. But yeah, originally this story was meant to be really short and pretty much a comment fic, but it was the Katherine voice in my head that wouldn't shut up, and it just spiraled from there. Once I understood what Katherine was doing in the story, everything fell into place. Tyler's POV oddly comes really naturally to me and I'll never understand why that is, but I really glad what I wrote worked for you and you liked it! <3 Thank you! :D