Comments | roo1965: SGA Shep Fic "Stranger in a Strange Land part 2"

roo1965

SGA Shep Fic "Stranger in a Strange Land part 2"

Aug 08, 2011 02:41

( Part Two )

shepfic, summer exchange2011, sga fic

Comments 12

kriadydragon August 8 2011, 19:49:05 UTC

Excellent. Loved the mystery of everyone forgetting Ronon and Teyla, and loved John being clever and figuring it out.

roo1965 August 21 2011, 21:39:45 UTC

thanks for your comments and that you enjoyed the fic.

drufan August 9 2011, 04:02:22 UTC

Thank you! This ticked off all my quirks. I really liked how after all the trauma of the planet there is just one more little problem to deal with, missing teammates that no one seems to remember.

Truly enjoyed it!

roo1965 August 21 2011, 21:41:21 UTC

Phew! Thank goodness for that! I tried really hard to fit in what you wanted, but it just would not play ball for the longest time. thanks for reading.

coolbreeze1 August 10 2011, 21:32:56 UTC

Glad John didn't forget Teyla and Ronon! Loved how John was all drowsy at first and not quite catching on that something was wrong, but then when he did figure it out, he acted and got his team back. The mining world at the beginning was intriguing and I love stories that deal with those Genii wanted posters still floating around... :D

roo1965 August 21 2011, 21:57:03 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it, yes- those pesky posters sure hung around for a long time! Also, i agree, seems like forever since we had a mining world...

titan5 August 12 2011, 15:10:52 UTC

Very cool. I loved John's superstition about Elizabeth seeing them off. And Rodney's comment about him looking like someone drew a mustache on his Johnny Cash poster. Those Genii wanted posters have provided many good story ideas - if only the writers knew what they'd started. And I always love John saving the day!!

roo1965 August 21 2011, 21:58:07 UTC

Don;t ask me how the superstition thing got in there, it just happened way after the main event and got added in...Of course, JOhn...and Rodney save the day, actually they all do!

sgamadison August 19 2011, 02:22:51 UTC

The superstitions really rang true for me--when you work in a stressful/dangerous job, you tend to create rituals to help you make it through the day.

I really thought everything was okay until Beckett said, "Who's Ronon?" Gave me chills, it did! :-)

roo1965 August 21 2011, 21:59:17 UTC

Happy to chill you with the Who's Ronon? comment. Glad you like the superstition bit about rituals.