Comments | rontoberfest: And I Feel Fine NC-17 by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/fluffyllama">fluffyllama</a></strong>

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And I Feel Fine NC-17 by fluffyllama

Oct 13, 2008 08:56

Title: And I Feel Fine
Author: fluffyllama
Team: Winter
Prompts: Crucio, Oliver Wood
Pairing/Genre: Ron Weasley/Oliver Wood
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,666
Warnings: Short torture scene, not graphic.
A/N: Thank you to Caroline as always for her invaluable help looking this over.

( And I Feel Fine )

team winter, ron/oliver

Comments 16

abigail89 October 13 2008, 16:40:38 UTC

OH, YAY! My second favourite ship flies high and true in this excellent, wonderful story.

Ooh, a hurting Ron and comforting Oliver. I love the glimpse into Ron's mind and there are some fabulous things you've found, like It was the familiar sights and smells of Gryffindor Tower and the Quidditch changing rooms, he decided by the time he'd finished his tea and was on his second beer. The boys' dorm rooms, the showers and boys' lockers. That uniquely masculine flavour of places that were untamed by the hand of a woman, and probably even house elves feared to tread for horror at the rampant testosterone and potentially lethal foot odour. God, that describes the state of boys so well I just may have to borrow it some time. :D

Excellent writing all around. Well done!!

fluffyllama October 14 2008, 16:11:36 UTC

Aww, thank you! I've been so nervous about this being posted I don't know when I would have checked if I hadn't seen you mention it *g* It feels like forever since I've written HP, but I couldn't resist a bit of Ron.

God, that describes the state of boys so well I just may have to borrow it some time. :D
Hehe, feel free. You can tell I have two brothers, can't you? Hee.

shygryf October 13 2008, 18:07:46 UTC

*grins*

such a lovely fic!

fluffyllama October 14 2008, 17:51:36 UTC

I find myself in complete agreement with your icon! Thanks for reading, glad you liked it :-)

lotus_lizzy October 13 2008, 20:00:03 UTC

Gah! I loved this! This story was so sweet and so natural. It wasn't rainbows and flowers, but real people coming together over some beer and gentle brotherly ribbing.

Wonderfully done.

plotbunniofdoom October 14 2008, 04:13:54 UTC

This is just such a great story!

The h/c thing worked so well. The hair stroking was gorgeous and the family breakfast really well written.

Great story.

ms_worplesdon October 14 2008, 16:23:39 UTC

This? Was just wonderful! I loved it to bits. :D