Tipping Point NC-17 by innibis - Part Two

[rontobermod]

Title: Tipping Point
Author: innibis
Team: Winter
Prompts: Patronus and Gringotts
Pairing/Genre: Harry/Ron
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: around 11,500
Warnings: Character Death
A/N: Usial disclaimer: I am not JKR and would never pretend to be. Many thanks to libgirl who was, as always, an enormous help.

read Part One first

Comments

[earth_dragon]

jesus, what an emotional ride! as i said before, the characters are so well done. the story doesn't give you any real resolve in the end, but that is the way of war.

this really an excellently written piece!

[innibis]

Thank you so much.

I wanted to try to get the whole war in there, but there was just no way.

Thanks for commenting.

[nolagal]

wow. Such a strong story. The emotion poured from it, almost overwhelming. I loved that Ron's patronus changed into an otter and that it needed both of them to touch it and Ron saying that he knew who he belonged too.
Wonderful story.

[innibis]

Thanks.

I'm really glad that it worked for you.

[maevemist]

I do not know what to say but I couldn't not comment to tell you that I read it. The tiny glimpers of hope, Harry and Ron's love for each other give a sense of all of the heartache and misery being almost worthwhile.

Thank you for sharing this is beautiful in that sad oh my I have real tears kind of way.

(sorry if that doesn't make any sense but it is all I can manage)

[innibis]

I understand. It's a lovely compliment, thank you.

[charma_10]

Oh, boys. Losing their Hermione and all the fighting and the love and all the wonderful angst.

I'm incoherent, but well done!

[innibis]

Thanks so much.

I never kill people off, and I feel guilty for taking Hermione away from her boys.

[tiger_flame]

This was so wonderful... The desperation and the hope and the unresolved ending and the kiss and the scene with the goblins and OH! So wonderful! *hugs*

[innibis]

*hugs*

Thank you so much. I'm really glad that you liked it.