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Sweet Revenge NC-17 by charma_10

Oct 02, 2008 08:14

Title: Sweet Revenge
Author: charma_10
Team: Summer
Prompts: Weasleys’ Wizarding Wheezes, Tergeo
Pairing/Genre: Ron/Hermione, Het.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,009
Warnings: Fluff, Sexual Situations, Adult language

A/N: My f-list knows the torture that I went through to write this (aren’t you all glad the whinging is over?), but I’m glad I persevered. ( Read more... )

team summer, ron/hermione

Comments 52

charma_10 October 2 2008, 15:42:20 UTC

Hey mods, I just noticed a typo that I missed. Any chance of getting it edited? It's in the third sentence.

and the day had been a constant blur of Flooing and Appariting between

Appariting should be Apparating :)

rontobermod October 2 2008, 16:04:06 UTC

got it. :)

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charma_10 October 2 2008, 23:04:43 UTC

Thanks! As soon as I saw the prompts, the idea just jumped into my head.

Well, to give the poor boy credit, it had been a while :P

shocolate October 3 2008, 20:56:02 UTC

I was gonna say that - their every word is foreplay!

How does he not explode?

ragdoll October 2 2008, 18:07:13 UTC

Mmmmm this was lovely and hot and sweet! You've left me speechless! :)

charma_10 October 2 2008, 23:05:06 UTC

Thanks! Exactly what I was aiming for!

ragdoll October 2 2008, 23:07:17 UTC

You did it beautifully. :)

drcjsnider October 2 2008, 18:13:11 UTC

lovely story! Hot, steamy, needy... just what I like in my fics and my sex. Great job!

charma_10 October 2 2008, 23:05:30 UTC

I aim to please. Both readers, and Ron. Thanks!

hpuckle October 2 2008, 18:34:34 UTC

Very hot and very them.

Loved their banter, and your brilliant use of the prompts!

xxx

charma_10 October 2 2008, 23:06:05 UTC

Thanks, mate!

It's always wonderful hearing I've got the characters right!