Comments | rontoberfest: Worth a Thousand Words - Part 2 PG-13 by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/auntbijou">auntbijou</a></strong>

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Worth a Thousand Words - Part 2 PG-13 by auntbijou

Oct 29, 2008 10:01

Title: "Worth a Thousand Words"
Author: auntbijou
Team: Winter
Prompts: Silencio, Babbling Curse
Pairing/Genre: Lucius/Ron
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 10, 254
Warnings: confinement, touching, inappropriate use of a wand, UST.
A/N: A great big thanks to the_rainbow_jen and the_minx_17 for going to bat as betas for me! Especially Jen for catching the one howling gaffe I had made ( Read more... )

ron/lucius, team winter

Comments 8

shocolate October 29 2008, 19:11:08 UTC

big tits, really big tits... scary tits... what, no onions?

*falls off chair*

This whole glimpse into Ron's mind was fabulous!!

auntbijou October 30 2008, 02:02:02 UTC

*snorts with laughter* Thank you! I'm so glad that came across, because I was worried about it.

shocolate October 30 2008, 02:17:08 UTC

I loved him trying so hard to focus and being so upset that his thoughts were such gibberish...

...and thank you for the ending... it's not a scenario I'd usually read, and the end helped!

auntbijou October 30 2008, 16:40:20 UTC

♥

star54kar October 30 2008, 01:11:40 UTC

Wow!

Utterly fantastic!

*scrolls up for another read*

auntbijou October 30 2008, 02:02:26 UTC

Hee! Thank you!

star54kar October 30 2008, 02:10:01 UTC

I hope to have a slightly more intellegent comment for you later.

Frankly I'm overwhelmed, by the levels in this piece and I need to digest everything!

Seriously amazing work!

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auntbijou October 30 2008, 16:39:38 UTC

*grins* Well, it was a very confining story! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!