Comments | ronsard: [fic] sexy/ugly, anko/sakura, nc-17

ronsard

[fic] sexy/ugly, anko/sakura, nc-17

Dec 13, 2006 22:01

I think writing that crazy DeiNaru piece must have had me all ficced out for awhile, because this fic took entirely too much time to write, considering the pairing and subject matter.

Still, here's the first of the Wishlist projects, going out to erisabesu, who asked me how I felt about AnkoSakura femslash XD Hope you enjoy it ( Read more... )

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lykomancer December 13 2006, 22:21:02 UTC

Oh, man. There was so much good about this that if I tried to list my favorite lines or parts, you'd even up with a comment containing most of the fic quoted back at you.

But I must say that I especially love the way you portrayed Anko and her casual, off-handedly batty, kinky nonchalance...and I love even more seeing it the through Sakura's pov.
Absolutely delightful~!

Thank you!

ronsard December 13 2006, 22:25:01 UTC

Hee, thank you! I'm so glad you like that (and really hope the person receiving it will too), because I had this nagging feeling I might have taken too much liberty with the characterizations >_> Sakura especially came off as a flaming spaz, but I kinda love that about her here...

Anko is sexy/ugly love ♥

lykomancer December 13 2006, 23:07:50 UTC

Actually, I lied about not quoting bits back because this-- ...it’s a big old world out there, full of shiny, terrifying things with leather and garter-belts and vibrating sex toys. I really think you should branch out a bit?
Not only is that brilliant, I'm totally going to use that in conversation as soon as I find a suitable opening.
...so to speak. Heh.

*nods* I hope they like it as well, and personally, I think your characterizations are good.

gryffindorsnake December 13 2006, 22:46:53 UTC

Wow, you have a very unique style, and I love it. XD

♥

gryffindorsnake December 13 2006, 22:53:01 UTC

Ok, I now realise that was a totally lame comment.

What I meant to say was, I really liked the story as well as your writing style. I'm a total sucker for humor, and I liked how consistent it was throughout the whole thing. It was funny, too. XD

Also, I thought it was impressive how you kept the lovin' sort-of-but-not-really-implied, but still worthy of an NC-17 rating. But I'm just weird like that.

ronsard December 13 2006, 22:57:47 UTC

Strangely enough, I totally knew what you meant XD

I must say, I'm running the risk of false advertising with the NC-17 label, but I just don't see any other way. Anko and her, uh, uniqueness alone is nothing short of electric, and I wouldn't want to foist that off on any unsuspecting victim.

I'm glad you liked the humor.

funkyfuzake December 13 2006, 23:37:17 UTC

afdklahfkdjlahjsf HOSHIT THIS ROCKED. I'm rapidly becoming addicted to this coupling, and this fic had me at the first few lines. And is it weird for me to find Anko's airy candidness utterly hot? 'Cuz damn. Of course, it was wonderfully funny, too. Fab on so many levels. Mounds of love for you!

ronsard December 13 2006, 23:49:31 UTC

The women in this series, for all that they're under-represented, are seriously HOT. We need to come together and promote this hawtness to the world, damn ♥

funkyfuzake December 14 2006, 00:49:51 UTC

Oh, I'm totally with you on that. We'll lure 'em in nice and slow with the sex-on-legs that are the Naruto women collectively, and then...

koestenbaum December 13 2006, 23:52:30 UTC

Haha I loved it. It sounds like something I would do (wait...did? Am I too experienced for that now?)...sitting there listing off anatomical jargon while in shock. Actually I think I'm still in shock over half of the things that have happened in my life anyway, so I guess it's future/present tense. I agree with the sexy/ugly thing, I usually like girls to be girls but sometimes butch girls are cute for no apparent reason (and I keep telling myself that if I really wanted a boy, I'd get a boy haha).

Very funny fic!

ronsard December 14 2006, 00:30:58 UTC

Icon love ♥ It's kind of hard to kill yourself with an oven these days, they're all electric >_>

I'm arguably girly-girl material, and I like butch girls. That air on air comment was something a friend said to me in the wake of a breakup, and I was all, 'Seriously, bitch?' XD

koestenbaum December 14 2006, 00:46:52 UTC

Old apartment buildings are still gas-run, I think. I am cutesy-girl material, but I have a really foul mouth and a really in-your-face attitude which sometimes confuses people (it's like Hello Kitty with a chainsaw behind her back). I'm confused as to why people don't think cynicism is cute. I think cynicism and sarcasm is adorable ♥.

Then again, I am still single haha...

yira_heerai December 13 2006, 23:53:49 UTC

...I need a drink >_> My mouth is very dry after reading this.

*fans self*

I can't say anything that hasn't already been said except god, I love you.

ronsard December 14 2006, 00:31:58 UTC

...I need a drink

A stiff one? :D Come into my boudoir.

Love you too. Where have you been? *huggles*

yira_heerai December 14 2006, 00:43:30 UTC

:D Would love to! <3333 I just need the money to fly out there so I can molest you something hardcore.

I have been either at work or home, but in either case I think it's been a psuedo-coma sort of haze. It's been hard to care about anything lately D: I think it's just the season. Blarg.