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[gaffsie]

Title: Don't Feel Like Dancing
Author: gaffsie
Recipient: stormylullabye
Medium: Fic.
Word count/length: ~1000w
Rating: Hard R.
Characters/pairing: John/Ronon, Rodney/alcohol.
Summary: Ronon's beginning to understand why he's never seen John dance before.

Comments

[gaffsie]

I'm glad you liked it!

[stormylullabye]

Yay! John's awkward, terrible dancing made me smile, as did the image of drunk!Rodney shimmying in front of the fire. Then rushed, urgent, forest sex was, of course, incredibly hot. Thank you, thank you!!

[gaffsie]

I don't know why, but in my head, John is an awful dancer. ;) I'm glad you liked it!

[brneyestx]

:D sorry I cant stop giggling to write.. I loved it!

[gaffsie]

No worries, I take the giggling as a compliment. :D

[esteefee]

oh, this was so awesome. so very, very awesome. loved how real it was.

Sweaty and disheveled and grinning like a drunken fool, he was actually inventing some of his own moves, pointing his forefinger up into the air and striking a pose. Teyla, who was dancing right next to him, was laughing so hard that all her usual grace had abandoned her. Ronon reflected that he should try out some of McKay's moves the next time he sparred with her. They seemed to do more damage than his own.

this whole thing, I could see it all so perfectly, Rodney with his finger in the air, and Teyla laughing, and I especially enjoyed Ronon's wry humor and him having mercy on poor John, who can't let go enough to drink and relax, but does let go when he's alone with Ronon. that's so telling to me.

\o/

[gaffsie]

Thanks! I'm so happy it worked for you!