Twelve (PG)

Jun 01, 2010 17:47

Twelve

Not a cloud in the sky, sun shining, birds singing and a thousand other clichés.

Oh the fucking irony.

It's supposed to be raining. The sky should be grey. I should be freezing as a harsh wind straight from a Dickens novel blows dead leaves around my feet.

But apparently the powers that be didn't get the memo. There's no pathetic fallacy ( Read more... )

burt, funeral, kurt, pg, character death

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Another Chapter trickster88 June 1 2010, 23:15:36 UTC
I kind of want it to continue into how he died, (it was Kurt, rite?) and then a strong ending. This story has a poetic kind of sense, which I absolutely adore!

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Re: Another Chapter romykate June 2 2010, 09:09:44 UTC
I was planning to write than into the story, but I found it didn't fit with the style of it. That's why I thought about doing a prequel, but I haven't really thought much about that yet.

I'm glad you liked it, anyway. :)

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qbhudson June 2 2010, 04:25:31 UTC
This was beautiful. To the point and sad. Perfect. Very nice work.

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romykate June 2 2010, 09:08:07 UTC
*blush* Thankyou xx

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