On the Pavement Underneath

Oct 25, 2008 00:31

Her spine lies parallel to the edge of the bed, staring across the vast expanse of mattress between them. She remembers when the distance was easy to cross, to bridge until she was snug against his warm skin and lost in the steady rhythm of his breath, lulling them both to sleep ( Read more... )

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aigooshesays October 25 2008, 08:08:19 UTC
Is everything ok? :(

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romanticalgirl October 25 2008, 16:41:09 UTC
Just some bad news in the family and stress and insomnia and all that fun stuff. I'll tell you more next time I see you.

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nolivingman October 25 2008, 12:26:10 UTC
Oh, it's beautiful emo prose.

*worries about you*

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romanticalgirl October 25 2008, 16:41:54 UTC
I keep thinking there's a verse missing in it. I just have to figure out what it was. It seemed much clearer at 1 AM.

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nolivingman October 25 2008, 19:09:41 UTC
Everything seems clearer at 1am.

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romanticalgirl October 25 2008, 20:24:50 UTC
Doesn't it though?

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popgurlie October 25 2008, 12:54:26 UTC
your words are always so beautiful, you should never apologize for sharing your gift.

{{hugs}}

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romanticalgirl October 25 2008, 16:42:22 UTC
It's just *so very* emo. Hee.

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inathunderstorm October 25 2008, 15:02:27 UTC
::sends hugs::

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romanticalgirl October 25 2008, 16:42:34 UTC
Thank you!

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inlovewithnight October 25 2008, 15:12:05 UTC
::loves you::

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romanticalgirl October 25 2008, 16:42:59 UTC
Thanks, sweetie.

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