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Dress Robes

Dec 17, 2007 02:37

Challenge Sixteen: Holiday Drabbles & Drawbles
Author: veradee
Wizard/Witch: Severus Snape/Lily Evans
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Prompt: #46 dress robes

"But, mum..." Severus said when his mother placed a robe on top of his trunk. It was patched up and looked suspiciously like one of his father's old suits ( Read more... )

Comments 21

ginny_weasley31 December 17 2007, 05:28:59 UTC

Oh, poor Severus. My heart just aches for him.

veradee December 17 2007, 10:27:28 UTC

I think I've lost the ability to write uplifting texts about Snape.

rosedemon December 17 2007, 15:11:10 UTC

Oh my.

I read this last night and it stuck with me all evening. Well done and oh so heart wrenching.

veradee December 17 2007, 21:28:16 UTC

Oh, what a compliment. Thank you so much.

sshg316 December 17 2007, 15:22:52 UTC

Poor Severus. The more I think about how Lily treated him, the more convinced I am that she was never worthy of such love and devotion. *sniffles*

This is beautifully done.

veradee December 17 2007, 21:34:19 UTC

Thanks a lot. :)

I suppose she was just a young girl, but I've never understood why everyone in the book pretends that she had no flaws at all.

bambu345 December 17 2007, 20:16:14 UTC

Okay, so you broke my heart once already, and now you've twisted the knife. Sigh. I think I need to read some fluff now.

veradee December 17 2007, 21:26:20 UTC

I'm so sorry. ;)

bambu345 December 17 2007, 21:29:39 UTC

Not to be sorry ... you did this extremely well.

lewlinx December 19 2007, 20:04:34 UTC

There's nothing like a mother's love...but really, sometimes mothers should listen to their kids more closely! Poor Severus! I do hope Lily was nice to him though :)

veradee December 19 2007, 21:11:37 UTC

Well, we know how the story eventually ends, don't we? ;)