Tweaking

[writermerrin]

Challenge Thirteen: Marauder's Map
Title: Tweaking
Author: writermerrin
Wizard/Witch: Severus Snape/Lily Evans
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Genre: Romance/Whimsey
Word count: 500
Prompt: Marauder's Map
Summary: The elixer "induces euphoria in the drinker, with occasional side effects of excessive singing and nose-tweaking" -HBP

Comments

[redvelvetcanopy]

It might be a common pairing, but I like the contrast between Lily's silliness and Snape's seriousness! Very fun!

[writermerrin]

Thanks. Trying to imagine what a fifteen-year-old Snape would be like was quite the challenge.

[annie_from_aust]

loved it !!!

[writermerrin]

Thanks!

[firefly124]

Oh, that's very sweet! I love Snape/Lily. :-)

[writermerrin]

Thanks! I think she's the first one I ever thought of pairing him up with, even before I became a fan of his.

[irespressogirl]

*laughs* Great job! I'm very glad you decided to post the story. :) My favorite line: "Severus rubbed the offended appendage." LOLOL.

Oh, and I thought you had Sirius down very well, too! And, of course, James as well.

I look forward to your future postings at RTW!

--IEG

[writermerrin]

Thanks! I think I'm hooked on this now.

[bambu345]

I loved Lily's lightheartedness, even if it was potion-induced. I really enjoyed the Marauder dynamics, especially the way the others handled James' volatility.

Welcome to the group (it's only my second time posting, so I know just how you feel.)

[writermerrin]

*grins* Thanks. I've never written anything in this era; so I'm so glad it worked.